"Limited to ones' Imagination" - DC Fanfic

First of all I want to say author please don't take it to heart. So, Let's stat then this mc given the most broken ability possible. He can think of anything and become that being with no limit no string attached but mc doesn't use that properly. His parents died and he can simply revive them and that's it but he doesn't do that then there is the fact it was used as a moment of character development which didn't work out in the end as he was still not using that broken power to do anything actually. Yes it was said he doesn't have any motivation and I can go ok but the thing is if your parents die and if you had the power to rewrite reality itself and bring them wouldn't you do it if they are your loving parents Then there is the fact of people coming after him it was only for 1 chapter but I don't get why he even left. With his power had he wanted he could have just erased them or better force them to pay compensation for the damage they caused yet he does no such thing. Like Why? So, In conclusion it's a good story but if the author did a rewrite then it would be really good because there are some plot holes here and there but you can read it so it's good I suppose.

MC is really disturbing, his behavior makes you sick. While he can rewrite reality, he doesn't bring his family back to life. He is dating a Karen who is probably older than him with 2 children and is not very beautiful, and he is taking care of his children. While he has the power to do anything, he is living a life of waste.

I feel like it is supposed to be a slice of life fic, but the author forgot to include any of it. I don’t really care that the MC doesn’t have any motivation, or that he doesn’t use his powers well, but if you are going to take that route, you need to add at least some modicum of character development. To any of the characters. Literally none of the characters or any of the plot has any description at all. The whole story is just so barebones it’s unenjoyable.

Dogshit book, dogshit author, dogshit cuck mc that looks after other peoples semen, absolute garbage. Fuck this story.

Bad quality Rick Sanchez backstory. Really, the guy can do whatever he wants, and it can become boring. Rick started doing adventures. Mc here trying “I wanna simple life” thing even knowing it won’t work. So, you either become a god and erase everything about yourself so you can live your simple life, or stop caring so much already. Three useless characters in the story so far

Ok, honestly author, this story sounds good, but just reading up to the third chapter the protagonist and the characters seem like a bunch of mentally retarded people, MC says he's hiding when he's clearly not, he says he won't use his powers in public so he won't be noticed, Well, there are two big problems, he transformed into a fucking Optimus Prime in a toy store and then into Reed Richards to take an exam that is normally given in classrooms full of people, I don't even rewrite reality or erase the memories of people like Saiki Kusuo, Batman Lex and almost any guy with two brain cells would have had no trouble finding him if MC is so mentally retarded

It seems the author is projecting personal fetishes unknowingly. It's amusing considering the main character is dating an older woman with two children. What a life to waste!

It's different than most DC fics.. Mc just wants to be left alone while sometimes saving people, unlike most fics, where the Mc has a justice complex or a villan one. Keep on going. This one has a lot of potential to be a great read

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Es el MC mas simp qué leo en mucho tiempo.....no da.............................................................................................................................................

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NOPE .NOPE. Good idea, Very Very Bad story

The MC is sooooo bad