The Wedding Deception
Melisa was a lonely girl destined to be unloved, but fate had other plans when she began having strange dreams—visions of a life where she was forgotten, abandoned, and trapped in a loveless marriage.
Forced by her parents to stand at the wedding altar in her sister’s place, she was meant to marry Tristan Soveir, the notorious playboy. But fate twisted once more, and the groom was also swapped—to none other than Leonard Soveir, Tristan’s eldest brother and the powerful heir of the Soveir family.
Thrown into an unexpected marriage, Melisa is no longer the timid girl who once faded into the background. This time, she refuses to be a mere substitute for Olivia. With memories of her dream guiding her, she steps forward to change her fate.
Follow her journey as she unravels the mystery behind these dreams and fights to carve a new path for herself. Will she still remain in her sister’s shadow, or will she claim a life of her own?
"I will never become the pathetic me from my dreams."
so first off, this review comes in after reading chapter 5, so this isn't an entire story review. Gotta say, I was instantly hooked into finding out the reasons for the marriage, well done author! My two biggest issues, which are small, is that the sentence structure is off in a few places, and the dialog tends to be too blunt, giving information too directly. so with a bit more show, a bit less tell, some polishing on sentence structure, and this is a top tier novel! Great work! Melisa is instantly a sympathetic protagonist, Leo is mysterious and intriguing, even his parents are well presented and their personalities are believable. This one will definitely be one I finish. Thanks Author!
absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥
Interesting love it already highly recommend