After their first reincarnation, the exceptional individuals possessed powers far beyond those of their new worlds. But then, a shocking event occurred—25 outstanding beings, each from a different world, were drawn into a single battlefield. This world had been programmed to be strong enough to imprison and challenge them in a brutal war, where only the strongest could stand tall.
This is not a bad story; I find it creative. However, the writing and language could be better, possibly because the author had difficulty writing in English. But overall, it’s not bad at all.
Respect your investment, try to make most of it, don give up . world building not bad... Hope you will post new chapter.......... I'm vietnamese too
You've built the world in the story quite well. I don't know how the upcoming content will be, but Jonas' world-building is pretty solid. However, I think if you do the same for the remaining 24 characters, it might take quite a bit of time. There are a few holes, but they’re not significant. Respect for the effort you’ve put into your story.