Becoming the Tsuchikage in the Naruto World

After reading up to this point of 285 chapters, this is the best Naruto fanfic, in my opinion. There's a couple of factors that make this gem stand out. The author took the risk of creating his own work outside of Konoha, while others indulged in the "will of fire" or tried to change history for the better. While those fanfic is also good, it becomes repetitive and makes me feel like other villages don't matter. This fanfic takes a deep dive into the village structure and how the mc helps the village while not being overpowered. The mc is also willing to kill off important characters in Konaha or allow it to happen due his loyalty to his village and not being a fanboy trying to stop all Konoha deaths from ever happen. Also, while there are some fanfic where the mc came from the other village, it still falls short of this one simply because the mc is so overpowered that it doesn't really matter what village he came from and it just a tool to make the mc stands out. Or the mc started out at another village, but the story slowly made its way to Konoha anyway. The third reason this fanfic stands out is that the mc is not overpowered or having pokemon level harem or any for that matter. It feels the author put thoughts into this and not the "instant noodle" type of story where a self-centered mc is just being OP and emo or become a rabbit sage and breeds every female. Overall, to me, this is definitely one of the best Naruto fanfic out there if you like an mc from a different village, and his progress to power makes sense.

while the translation quality is good, and story may have promise later on, its very frustrating at start when they keep repeating multiple times how he is very weak physically even tho he is a 3 year old child and physically average for a child, story says he is average yet so so weak. somehow other kids are able to get medicinal baths to increase their strength better than him. what. then because his low physical strength his chakra is low, so he makes a very special yin chakra which gives him 10 times chakra yet even after 2 years later, his chakra cant even perform 1 transformation a day... just infuriating

It's a worthwhile read, but every story has a downside. Chakra is explained quite realistically, but author makes mc so special and so useless at the same time it's baffling. Also, in this story chakra recovery basically doesn't exist in a real sense - 1 jutsu a day and mc is done for. Mc creates unrealistic jutsu like water substitution where you need to use earth chakra release and etc.

The Novel at the start isn’t the best, especially when they talk about him being weak in physique when he’s three but it really blooms in the later parts with his progression and growth visible to the shinobi world. It taking place outside of Konoha is just a breath of fresh air, especially in Iwa. It feels like we’re learning about his potential with him. I can’t wait to see when he becomes Tsuchikage! Definitely deserves more views!

Man this sucks I found this webnovel to early If only I have seen this 2-3 years later good webnovel I read only the first chapter but I got to say it has a lot of potential keep it up …… please add a lot more chapters 🤧🤧🤧🤧

I have to say this is a pretty good story MC is not crazily overpowered the only issue I have with the story is the mc other than training and missions does not have much of a life(He has a personality it's just he doesn't have any hobbies or do anything for fun) the only real hiccup the story has is in the beginning the academy years are irritating because of the constant mention of lack of chakra and weak body this gets better after the academy in my opinion the good thing about this is it is not a tag along follow along the MC because he's always right type of story he makes mistakes his advice is sometimes wrong and his decisions don't always pan out don't get me wrong it's not to the point where he's a loser or anything like that but he's not omnipotent

Feels like a cultivation novel.. also… at times mc seems to have a lot of chakra to spam attacks but in other times he can’t use a b rank jutsu.. it gets infuriating sometimes.. then there r random bits where mc just sits on the ground for like an hour and just magically gets an achievement idk how to describe it but yeah.. lots of Chinese cultivation elements that don’t fit the story but I’m letting it slide cuz the writing quality is decent.

I've read till chapter 30 before I gave up and dropped this bull$hit fanfic. The translation was excellent and I have no problem with the translator, it's the author who is annoying me. He tried to make a Naruto fanfic where the MC transmigated with no Golden Finger, he is untalented, he is an orphan with no background etc. Although he made that story line completely logical, the problem is that it's completely boring! The Mc is so weak already and the author makes every attempt to nerf the MC further. The author also makes so many mistakes in common knowledge it's very annoying. (Like it take the chakra of 100 C rank ninjutsu to power 1 B rank ninjutsu). I'm so disappointed, this story really had a nice concept. A different Naruto fanfic that is also of the same concept is Naruto : The Wind Calamity, and that story is excellent and good.

One of the better Naruto fanfics out there. Very good rate of development for the characters, and an exploration of a new village that is relatively untouched. Iwa and kumo are undoubtedly the safest villages to be a genius in so there’s that. There’s prolly two odd little mishaps to the story. The first is this idea that one must have some sort of mental clarity type moment to move between the respective ranks in power. The second is this random side oc called ikura who hasn’t actually done anything of note or shown any talent at all yet for some reason is said to be on par with kakashi and minato and is the front runner for tsukikage over our mc, despite the mc doing some really cool politicking and showing he has the mindset of a kage. Keep in mind our mc entered the academy at 3 and became elite jonin at 14 (only due to being held back so he won’t be in danger) and this iruka is 2 years older and they act like he’s more talented, it’s kinda frustrating lol. Overall it’s a very well written story and I really like the way the main character gets stronger, it’s much more of a became op at jutsu route not a get sage mode or alien powers route. Give it a read!

Solid start 👍. MC has brains even if he's physically weak rn. Iwagakure setting is a nice change. Writing is good. Only thing is the pacing feels a bit slow... waiting 5 chaps for chakra 😅. Still, enjoying the realistic approach. Giving it 4 stars for potential! 🤔 Hope the action starts soon!

good story and clean translation, sadly i don't have the patience to stick with it since all Chinese ff take thousands of chapters to start getting to the endgame, also just from the rythem and update stability and chapters being released it will take probably 200 more irl days just for 3rd Shinobi world war arc to end, this is not counting filler chapters that randomly address his disciples that will probably keep on multiplying and wasting chapters

It's one of those novels that even without having romance genre in it still able to keep to entertained 😂😂... While it doesn't have many jokes and there's huge amount of training arcs they are always fast forwarded to not let the reader be bored. It becomes a bit boring in between when he starts training new group of students before becoming Tsuchikage, but everything became more interesting after he became the Leading Kage of the Village. I'm just hoping if he could make a new department of Science R&D researchers for advancing in science and technology too, as this will make everything more interesting and fun when other villages envy Earth Village for being a Technological and Scientific Huge with lots of talents ninjas of different bloodlines.

i just don't like those mc who are child and story progresses slowly with them like taking 50 to 100 chapter until mc becomes 10 year old. And it's impossible to join a ninja academy at the age of 3 and also about him being physically weak ( damn he is just 3 😂)

Hands down one of the top 5 to EVER be posted on webnovel. Of the currently ongoing Naruto fics it’s definitely top 3. There’s wind calamity which is always 1 spot and then I could argue it’s this one right here. NO NEED FOR EXTENSIVE REVIEW, JUST READ IT