Camelot's rise in Marvel
"Though the King may fall, he shall not fade; the Once and Future King shall awaken, and Albion shall rise anew."
For centuries, the prophecy was nothing more than legend. A myth whispered in ancient texts. But now, Camelot has returned.
Overnight, the great city stands once more, its banners flying high, its knights sworn to a king the world believed was lost to time. Arthuria Pendragon has not come to reclaim a title—she has come to rule.
In a world of super-soldiers, gods, and masked vigilantes, the return of Camelot is more than a mystery—it is a challenge to the order of nations. As the UK government scrambles to respond, SHIELD and intelligence agencies worldwide race to uncover the truth. Is this a miracle? A threat? Or the first step toward something far more dangerous?
History and legend collide with the modern age. And the world must ask itself: is the prophecy of the Once and Future King a promise… or a warning?
Besides the constant, incorrect usage of pronouns, the writing quality is fine. Update stability is fine. Story development is non'existent, 20 chapters and several hours of reading in and all that's happened is Artoria had a pointless cross country trip, loitered in Camelot for a few days, had a meeting with some nobodies and fury and Coulson making the same reppetetive observations again and again instead of actually doing something, there is no story because no one does anything and when they do do something it's pointless or boring or both. Character design is sub par, 20 chapters 0 development the only ones with any personality are Agravain (moody bastard) Gareth (innocent, happy child) and Mordred ( energetic, violent, insecure brat) but none of this matters because none of the Characters have any goals or any interesting interactions with each other. World background is bad too, it should feel like one of the Marvel universes but it doesn't since the only Marvel characters so far are the S.H.I.E.L.D cast who don't even feel like themselves since they're acting more like an appendage of the UK government and the Ancient One who popped in for 2 minutes rambled some nonsense and then left. This fic is not worth your time and I regret reading it, a shame since it could've been good if even a single fucking thing happened in this story.
Sir Arthur Came a lot didn't he... ... ...
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The novel starts very good and does a good job to make story interesting. The author said that he/she wanted to reveal that the mc is king arthur [Lion king from fate grand order] to everyone one earth and wanted to make the readers to see the reaction of that revelation. Now here the problem 2-3 chapters of that is fine but this has been going to for 10+ chapters in a row and 90% of these chapter are the same.
Hehehehe~!! Finally, someone has written my wishful thinking~. 'Camelot in the Marvel World; perfectly written World's Reactions; World Development; AND with the sense of ruling over the masses, but not as a Tyrant, but as a TRUE KING' *She is NOT some pushover KING who views herself as `equal to her citizens* PLEASE~!!! JUST DON'T DROP IT like other authors~.
can't read this anymore. 30 chapters in and not a damn thing happened. the two actions that artoria did was at the beginning, and even that was minimal. this is all politics, but the political keeps repeating over and over. like what the hell. get to the damn story, throw a punch, swing your weapons do something. this isn't a build up to anything. im sorry but this is just not good.
a true Gem in a sea of mediocrity
very boring, no plot development. nothing happens for 15 chapters. waste of time. Marvel world doesn't feel like that at all, instead some dull relationship with British bureaucracy
Reaction can be fun if something happens to react to. 20 chapters of reaction to the same thing is not. I read to like chapter 23 sincerely before just dropping it and checking here and there to see if something happens and it's still nothing. I rarely write reviews on this website since it's not a airport and i don't need to announce my departure but this man, the concept is super nice but the execution... i really can't deal with waiting for a chapter every day that is just more of the same reaction. If it was mass released and i can get through it in a binge, that would make it more tolerable.
Good writing quality, updates are fine, and I'm fine with a slow plot development because it is heading somewhere. However, there are several issues for me personally that I wanted to address. First, the MC Artoria feels very out of character. The MC is supposed to be an amalgamation of different Artorias, yet, I'm not convinced that any of the Artoria's we're familiar with would decided they were going to rule England and all the other governments can screw off. Goddess Rhongomyniad traveled the world for 1500 years and only did the whole singularity thing because she wanted to preserve humanity. Saber Artoria specifically didn't want to rule again and want her wish on the grail to be for someone else to take it up. Alter was extremely apathetic and disillusioned with everyone. They all seemed to acknowledge that their kingdom fell and their ruling was over, so why is the MC suddenly deciding to lay claim as King of England? Even ignoring what I believe are severe inconsistencies in characterization, for me personally, I just don't like the idea of her trying to lay claim to England at this point in time. I would have been far happier if she just decided to bring Camelot back and treat it more like her own little kingdom, maybe butting heads with the locals that way, but not expecting everyone of England to bow to her. Especially when there is a rightful Monarch even if they're a constitutional Democracy. Likewise with the earlier comments I made, their pride and dignity I feel would force them to accept that someone else was rightfully king or queen. There are also some logical inconsistencies. Like, they're constantly touting how perfect and amazing Camelot is, and how it's the ideal that they should be forcing on all of England. Yet, they conveniently forget that Camelot fell and was destroyed, thereby completely severing Artoria's presumption of 'divine right' that she threw around at the first meeting. She had her chance, she failed, and now she's acting like she still has 'the right to rule'. Anyways, these are my thoughts, overall, it's a fairly good read with mostly issues from my own personal opinion and some more objective wrongs that I pointed out.
Honest opinion jot bored after chapter 30 nothing significant really happened to the story, and where is the TVA they would have noticed Mc the moment she appeared, she an anomaly on their sacred time line, this guy would not even care but wouldn't erishem notice because from what I understand he's monitoring Earth, and my the hell is she not learning the portal magic it's op she can use it to travel between different reality and universes
Good story but also boring. REACTION!! too much reaction... [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
I really wish I could give you a 5 star but Jesus most of them are just reaction and super slow in the plot you could have just added a slow story tag in the story because there's barely any progress in the story like come on even in the story you based it on you know where a person reborn as saber literally a Chinese novel story seems way better than this and actually have good fighting scenes I'm not hating I actually like this story development the slow progress but please just let the story be a bit faster than this introduce more characters from marvel and include more fight scenes not just reaction
just don't waste your time here.25 chapters but there's little to no development in the story.
shitiest novel i've read