Danmachi: In Orario with Great Sage
A guy dies and is reborn in the world of Danmachi with 3 unique skills, one of them being Great Sage. Follow him he navigates the dungeon, makes friends and allies, and potentially finding love along the way.
In essence, this is a weak to strong fanfic set in Danmachi. The MC is an antihero at best, and while not evil, he does have some good traits, but wouldn't tolerate evil directed towards him or his loved ones. He is kind of OP, but within the scope of the skills he has. So nothing like being able to solo Ottar at level 1.
Give it a try, and see if you enjoy it. This is my second fanfic by the way.
It is an original fanfic, and I own nothing except my OC.
There are advanced chapters on my Patreon (still populating them), but up to 10 once I'm done.
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First chapter and it does look promising. The only thing wrong I can see right now is some minor spelling mistakes, but to be honest that is very common on WebNovel. As long as this isn’t a big harem story, and the author has a clear path for the character development then this could be a very good fanfic.
I love his first ff. So ig his second is not much different so expecting cooking from the author! (And MC’s name is pretty cool btw) and is this also a harem?👀I hope so😏
This has the potential to be a really good fanfic. I recommend reading it. In the following chapters more about the characters' personalities will be revealed.
I dont typically write short and overall unhelpful reviews but there's only 1 chapter so can't really review anything. On the other hand I am reviewing anyways because hopefully all and any support will encourage the author to continue this novel. I'll make another review once this passes 20 chaps. Till than good luck with this new fanfic, if the character interactions are similar to your mha fanfic, than this one has some great potential.
I love your MHA FF already so I'll definitely love this one. The type MC you write is right up my alley.
Please post faster it is hard to read then come back next week with only one chapter to read
Great story. The grammar is good and the author do a lot of research for the story. The mc has Great Sage, and it's a cool skill that we dont see often. Can't wait for more.
In my opinion it great. Although the start was kinda mugh but it was good nonetheless. And it's gets even better! Overall it's great in opinion. Love every part of it. Here a pic of MC from me.
This was honestly really good. I love the flow of the story so far. I think this could have been a five-star review if the author were more consistent with uploading new chapters. 4.8 stars will have to do.
The authors previous ff is one of my absolute favourites. The current one ... only two chapters in still has that same feel that I love in the other one... keep it up dude :)
Why is it that almost every author that's writing a fanfic set in Orario(Danmachi) is obsessed with the MC joining the Hestia familia as if there aren't other familiars or just wanting to ship the MC with Hestia? Like it's reached a point where 9 times out of 10, l drop a fanfic if the MC joins the Hestia familia because shxt just feels stale, lazy even, after being rehashed this many times. I know I went on a rant but I was about to enjoy the story before this shxt ruined it for me. I'm sure the author wrote a good story with a great plot but I'm dropping here. Wish you all the best author-san
I don't normally write reviews but this fic is just awesome. I really like tensura and any fic with elements of it gets a plus in my book. Grammar is good, very readable.
Great job, author. Keep going ………………………………………………………….…………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………
A very good start to a really great Danmachi fan fiction by a good author 😁👍
It's an interesting story so please don't stop it.