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The war ended. The scars remained.
One hundred and forty years ago, humans and Kratians bled together to survive annihilation.
Peace followed.
But peace is a lie told by those who benefit from silence.
Now, the Ortho Sapiens rise, radicals born from fear, fed by hate.
They will erase the Kratians.
They will rewrite history in blood.
Jack doesn’t rise, he erupts with fury.
Half-human. Half-Kratian.
Loyal to his own. Merciless to his enemies. A storm forged in loss, consumed by an insatiable hunger for vengeance.
With a stolen time machine and a cohort of broken killers, he will vanish into the past.
Not to undo what was done.
To become what must be feared.
Because what’s coming isn’t justice.
It’s a reckoning.
And the future won’t survive it.
It was worth the read 💯. And it'll be worth the wait too. But srsly can't wait for the next chapter
Great start. I like your writing style and the overall idea.
Echoes of Extinction is a hauntingly beautiful post-apocalyptic tale that blends emotional depth with gripping world-building. The main character's journey is raw and powerful, filled with hard choices, real growth, and gut-wrenching moments. It’s dark, poetic, and surprisingly hopeful. If you enjoy stories that hit both the heart and the mind, this one’s a must-read.
seems like a good starting, as it captivates a reader like me, with difficult attention. Looking forward to the following chapters!
it was good novel as you just started writing one lets see what this novel brings us. keep it up and don't forget to update it every week and
The world setting got my attention the most , xeno-homo wars quite fascinating history. I'm looking forward to seeing the twist and turns upcoming with it
A fantastic start, a pretty interesting storyline, interesting concept of Power/energy, And bit familiar with the concept of awakening of the ikanami. So far so good, keep going!!! Looking forward to the next chapters.
It's fucking amazing, an amazing first chapter, the characters look good too, good story, pretty good naming, I'm hoping a really good novel. And the most important part, IT'S WRITTEN BY MY BROOOO, SO FUCK YEAH, YOU BET IT'S GETTING A 5 STAR
nice this chapter was also very good and with new details I cant wait what comes and I have seen already 2.6K people have read it it awesome seeing that you just started
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Really interesting story, somethin new in quite a long time. Liked the concept of power and energy though the awakening of Ikanami is pretty familiar. The history is quite interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quite a fun read with good potential!
Having the kratians and homo kratians and xenos reference is gud the character build the surroundings details and the character details the story line evo is going through a gud refs hope to see more
Another great chapter thanks for the chapter and you also preprease well for your exams. But how many chapter have you made till now cant wait to see the next chapter
It's a great story, it has a unique concept and the characters are well written, overall it's a great novel for the first time work of an author and it will be a masterpiece if you keep developing it
Good start and the novel can develop and good writing style