Rebirth in The Tvd Verse

❤️Merci pour l'histoire. ❤️ 08/20 Hello, I give up. There's a lot wrong with Ch8. Despite artificial intelligence, creating a story isn't for everyone. Here's what's wrong (incomplete list): - A thousand years of the protagonist's life are skipped. - Possession of a useless magic castle. If the MC is as strong as, or even stronger than, the originals, he can take an island, mask it by magic, and make it his domain. It's much better than giving it to him ready-made via a gift from God. - Robotic dialogue. Of course, with AI, the characters seem soulless. I'll end by saying that writing a story, especially when you're starting out, is "boring." You don't come up with a great script in two hours and have the job as is. You imagine the world, the characters (you've made notes), you've imagined the main plot BEFORE EVEN STARTING TO WRITE A SINGLE LINE. Then we started to write, we read it, we rewrote it once or twice, we reread it, we polished it, that's how authors write good and great chapters.

The quality, the writing style, the plot, character development.. everything is just a step above sh*t but not quite mid.. I was excited for a tvd novel but it looks like not everyone can make one..

I look forward to seeing where this goes it looks like a great start to the story