Kill to evolve: A system that demands blood
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You know that shit that usually happens, when a nice peaceful day suddenly turns out to be the worst day of your life. Meet Ronan Vale, the main character of this story
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Humanity lives under an unseen rule—the Ascension Cycle. A hidden system selects individuals at random, forcing them to complete tasks and gain different abilities as a reward. Anyone who fails a mission assigned by the system will instantly die on the spot.
Ronan Vale wasn’t chosen at random.
Killed on a mission gone wrong, he wakes up with a system unlike any other:
[Evolution Path: Kill to Survive]
[Failure to Execute: Life Force Erosion Begins]
Ronan has only one way to stay alive—which is to obey every mission assigned to him by the system. Unlike others, Ronan evolves after every task, each kill makes him stronger, sharper....but less human.
As he fights to survive, he realizes his system is different. It evolves with him. It whispers to him. And it may not be just a tool—but a living thing.
As war brews between Harbingers—those who embrace the system—and Eradicators, who seek to destroy it, Ronan is caught in the middle. But he has no time for their games.
Because the real question isn’t how to survive.
But what he’ll become in the process. A heartless monster bred only for destruction? he was about to find out.
Dive into the story of how a once powerless single father ended up becoming a deadly threat to the whole world.
A:N; There'll be no harem. And the MC will be overpowered. Dark fantasy.
if you're looking for a perfectly written book, then this isn't for you. it's my first time writing ml, not just that, I'm new to writing in general, there might be lots of plot and pacing issues. if you don't mind, then go on and enjoy.
Author here with her shameless review , as they always say😅. I'm a 'she', and it's my first time writing male lead, so I hope you all can bear with me as I'm not experienced in this genre...you can leave critique comments and reviews, but please be nice 🥺. So now, if you got questions or any advice of such, you can comment here, i welcome anything as long as you put it nicely 💞. About my book, lemme do a brief description on the male leads personality...he is what we all know as morally grey....he becomes cold hearted over time, and he keeps to himself a lot. never causes trouble but also doesn't easily forgives those who messes with him or his family. He is 29, not a kid...so he's a little different from all the other male leads you all are used to reading. But i promise, he doesn't become completely inhuman. he might go berserk at some point....but he'll return to his normal self later on. Alright now, Ronan aside, let's talk about the power system, here in this world, most people get their abilities from system,not just the ml this time around, and no one is supposed to have more than one ability granted to them by their system, but of course ...the ml always gets something different and unique from the others. I've always dreamed of writing about an overpowered ml, so that's what I plan on doing. I'll try to make this story unique and interesting for you all, and hope you-all stick around without getting bored...Thanks for adding my story to collection and hope you read through too. I'll also appreciate if you also send gifts and support my work🥹🤧. Thanks for your time💞. For update, I'll try to update 2 to 3 chapters daily, but for now ...it's still 2 daily. your nice comments might make me wanna write more though, so leave some on your free time😊.
As long as the author continues what he is doing with this, I believe it would be a great hit. A little rushed in some places but it evens out with the way things are done in the novel. The mc is currently very human who isn't opposed to killing. I would love to see him become a blood thirsty killer where even his son would not recognise him as his father. The system he had was a bit different in the beginning but changes into the generic one we see on webnovel. I just hope the author doesn't drop this, has potential, won't lie. Definitely give it a read, the English is very good as well, far better than most novels on this site.
There are many things I could say about this novel, but I'd like to talk about my foremost points as if I were selling it to you. That's kind of what a review is, anyway. There are SO many system novels that plague this forum. I do not envy fans of the genre, I imagine it's like holding your hands out in the ocean hoping that a pretty seashell will be swept up into your palms... but this was honestly quite interesting. The world is presented as many others of the system genre are, a world that is suddenly endowed with the presence of intense and amazing powers, gifting people with superhuman capabilities. But there's one key trait that separated this from all the others from the very start: no one really wants to be gifted these abilities. This is because once a person is allowed to face their own claim of power, they have to first offer up their life in a deadly gamble. And this is something they have no choice over, it is only chance. One day, they might just be faced with their own opportunity to vie for power, but also battle against the risk of death. That is what intrigued me the most. We all run the risk every day of being hit by a car as we walk along the sidewalk, or be robbed and killed going home. None of us do this as we seek reward, but because it is simply the life we live. This element of a 'system being presented as a basic element of reality' was seamless in my head, it wasn't something inherently special, it was something unlucky, but also just part of life. The main character, Ronan, was offered many 'human' elements to his character that could later be masterfully paralleled by just how 'inhuman' he could become. The author's characterisation and how they apply it to the actual story is wonderful. And, as a matter of indulgence, many of the action scenes are packed with... ah, 'aura farming', for a lack of a better descriptor. Just so many cool moments that make you kick your feet up and down out of excitement, or something similar... I really recommend giving this novel a try, if only to free yourself from the repetition of the genre, for once...
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This is a fun story. Especially if you like OP power systems, this will be right up your street 👍