Betrayed. Hunted. Forgotten.
Raizel Veyne was born into nobility, destined for greatness. Yet on the night of his family’s fall, he was framed for treason, his parents were executed, and his very name was erased from history. Thrown into the empire’s darkest prison, he was tortured, starved, and left to die.
But death was not the end.
At the edge of despair, a voice from the void whispered to him—offering power at an unspeakable cost. Bound by an ancient, forbidden force known as the Devourer’s Grasp, Raizel escaped his fate… by becoming something beyond human.
Now, armed with the ability to consume power, memories, and even fate itself, he walks a path of vengeance and domination. The empire that betrayed him will kneel. The ones who abandoned him will suffer. And the gods who play with mortal lives?
He will devour them, too.
In a world where power is everything and the strong rewrite history, Raizel will carve his own legend.
"They left me with nothing. So now, I will take everything."
Was the nightmare in this chapter symbolic, or is there something sinister foreshadowed? Are we meant to sympathize with the villain, or will their true motives be revealed later?
That reveal sent shivers down my spine. The foreshadowing was masterful "You’ve nailed the sense of dread and mystery. Keep unraveling the secrets I’m hooked Every chapter leaves me wanting more. Keep the darkness coming
"That cliffhanger was brutal! I’m hooked!"Did not see that plot twist coming! Keep it up!""Loving the story so far! Some minor grammar tweaks would make it even better."
Loving the fresh concept! Can’t wait to see how the story unfolds!" "The writing style is so immersive. Great start!""Loving the chemistry between the characters already!"
🔥 "Raizen’s transformation is getting more terrifying with every chapter! That moment when he [insert major event from Chapter 5] sent chills down my spine. Is he even human anymore, or is he becoming something far worse? The foreshadowing is insane—I feel like we’re only seeing the beginning of his true horror. What do you guys think? Will he still have a shred of humanity left, or is he doomed to embrace the Devourer’s power completely?" 🔥
Alright, I need theories. What’s the true purpose of the Devourer’s Throne? I feel like we haven’t even scratched the surface yet. I think it is best but it is confusing If anyone wants to read. I will tell you something chapter 1 is present time and chapter 2 and 3 are past story of the mc (Raizen) from chapter 4 it continue from chapter 1 again so don't get confused
The way the story unravels… it’s like watching a god fall and a monster rise. Who else is getting Berserk x LotM vibes? "Author, you’re crafting something legendary here. Keep going, we’re all hooked"
This is unlike anything I’ve read before! The brutality, the mind games, and the psychological breakdowns—absolute perfection.This is unlike anything I’ve read before! The brutality, the mind games, and the psychological breakdowns—absolute perfection. "Every chapter feels like a descent into madness, and I LOVE it. This is Webnovel’s next masterpiece!"
Reading this at 3 AM was a mistake… now I’m addicted. Send help!" "Author, do you enjoy torturing us with these cliffhangers? Because it’s working!"
The world-building is solid, and I like the pacing so far. A bit more character depth would make it even better. Keep going, author! Interesting start! The mystery keeps me hooked. Maybe work a bit on smoother transitions, but overall, I’m loving it
This story has a lot of potential! I love the unique premise and can’t wait to see where it goes. Keep up the great work, author A fresh concept with engaging writing! Looking forward to more chapters.