Douluo: Spiritual Sword

420 Days uploading chapters without break! Here we go again with a new Douluo Dalu fanfic! Are you tired of the main character constantly trash-talking Tang San and the other original cast members? Then this book is for you. No arrogant young masters, and no altering the personalities of Tang San or the Grandmaster to make them seem bad. It's all about our main character cultivating to reach the pinnacle of strength in the Douluo world. Plus, there’s early romance with Ning Rongrong and Qian Renxue!.

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While the story itself is decent and I like how many characters were given traits that allowed them to stand out and become more interesting, the main character is an issue. He is making unnecessary and dangerous decisions based on what he percieved someone would react from the book, which is a horrible idea, as in a actual world, these characters would have no plot stopping them from commiting actions that could end the mc. Moreover, the mc places himself in the hands of someone vastly more powerful then him, which is idotic, as he has the backing of a powerful sect with two douluo behind him who he can rely on, instead of potentially getting himself killed or injured in a way that could damage his potential, with the risk/ gain ratio being skewed against him. While the previous actions are things you can gloss over, the main problem that made me give the story up was the fact that the mc reveals basically all his abilites to a stranger for nor reason. He did not have to reveal his second martail spirit to the posion douluo and he espcially did not have to tell him about the special domain it has, information that is life threatening in the wrong hands, and things he should keep to himself. The mc’s willingness to lay himself bare to someone who is much more powerful then him for reasons that don’t give him a greater advantage were that main things that made me give it up. However, if you can ignore the previous points, the story itself is alright, and I like the deductive reasoning certain characters can make. Also, I liked how the author tried to give the mc a rival but honestly, it dosent work in this situation because of how overpowered the mc’s abilities are. The only people potentially capable of remotely keeping up with him is the the supreme pointoff and her daughter in terms of potential, but even then two divine grade martial soul, even while unawakened are too powerful. Lol I went on a little rant, but yea.

I hope in this story this trash tang san, his father and his teacher are punished heavily!!!

Utter garbage. The writing is dry and unrefined. Dialogs are artificial, and emotions are very porrly conveyed The story is a disappointment. There are just too many cheats for the MC. Not only that, but there are many plot holes and illogical developments. Character design: It might just be a personal preference, but I hate this Mc, even og Tang San was far better. He is essentially a dog of the seven treasure sect and does literally anything to strengthen them, even sacrificing his own future. This is just ridiculous, considering he has already repayed their kindness towards him several times over. Update stability is good World background is bad. The author doesn't even bother describing the environment most of the time.

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Really like this story. Thnx for your hardwork. Please keep going but at your own pace. Enjoying it till now...............................

it's a good douluo fanfic, post more chapters

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uhhhh harem or no harem ? .

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Like the idea of that book. Interesting fanfic to read.

writing quality and updating stability is the only good points in this ff, the story is bad the MC is too much of a Dog to the sect that its irritating to read writing quality and updating stability is the only good points in this ff, the story is bad the MC is too much of a Dog to the sect that its irritating to read