welcome to juni a world of infinite possibilities not dreams domino has a lot to face and don't forget to mention his minor inconvenience that always ruin him last minute domino wants to fix this world and all that is within it without causing destruction and he needs to heal his older sister

the shadow within the light

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The story itself isn’t bad at all. If I wanted to be petty, I could point out things like spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, but most of the time, you’d accidentally overlook them. For instance, instead of ‘the,’ it might show up as ‘te,’ but in context, it still makes sense. I genuinely find the story unique and appreciate how the author has made it their own. I'd definitely recommend it to others—it has a solid foundation. It's a shame that only five chapters are out so far. I’d love to see more development on the power dynamics, and it would be interesting to dive deeper into the shadow’s past or explore why he does what he does. In summary, it’s a really solid book with a lot of potential, and I can’t wait to see where it goes next. There’s definitely much more to come from this story.


