Fantastically written, each character is distinct and fleshing out the characters has been done spectacularly.
The prose is easily readable with the descriptions being on point, it doesn't feel preachy or over the top.
Looking forwards to more
2 months ago
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Lewis_Emery
Really good work!! Great building of mystery and tension. Really vivid description that draws you right into the character’s shoes. Keep up the great work
Fantastically written, each character is distinct and fleshing out the characters has been done spectacularly. The prose is easily readable with the descriptions being on point, it doesn't feel preachy or over the top. Looking forwards to more
Really good work!! Great building of mystery and tension. Really vivid description that draws you right into the character’s shoes. Keep up the great work