Moxie Solo
Year (December 2019) A dead experiment that turned alive
“Before your father come back home, get lost…” her step-mother pushed her out of the house.
Wu Jin Lan ran from her hospital bed.
She was feeling lonely.
“Mother, I am better now,” she pleaded so that her mother could let her enter in the house where she used to play all day long with her biological mother.
But after her death, Wu Jin Lan suddenly fell sick and the doctors told that her heart and organs were losing their routine and she might become a permanent hospital visitor and this proved true.
“Get lost and never come back, you are simply a trash and your father is simply wasting his money on his trash daughter, you are also snatching the money that my child deserve,” she scorned and spat out.
Wu Jin Lan was broken to hear this, she walked back with heavy steps, her hospital long shirt swaying on her lean and thin figure.
[If you guys are interested to read further, you are welcome, a small reminder, if you are looking sci-fi romance, I suggest this story is not your cup of tea, Join female lead on her journey with me your author here.]
Author
_Sha
Hi, dear readers, this story is about a girl who was abandoned and neglected. The time gave her an opportunity to kill her enemies but alas she was no more human, she became a self learning robot in result of an experiment. I welcome you for a good read.
Followed till the latest chapter. Great piece of work. I would like to commend you for this stage of the novel. So far so good. Great MC, great storyline, great use of the grammar, great world building. Great book. Keep it up, fellow author👍
Definitely a must-read story. The concept is original, and intriguing. Characters are interesting, and have their own sense of individuality. Text is grammar-wise. Overall, great job 👍
I am recommending this story.This is a fabulous story with different texture, chareacter and emotion.Here most of the story in this app telling abut rich heroes and Beautiful heroines but this story is containing different kind of emotions. Here the author create a strong bond between a robot and a girl. Besides it is containing only 65 chapters that means this don't have any unnecessary context. Everyone should read this. It's a kind of master piece. Thanks author. May Allah bless you with all the happiness of havens😊😊.
Reviewed at chapter 4: An intriguing drama of eviction and hope. Belonging and dispatch. I am eager to see where this leads.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Ah, I read the whole story, and then came to review. The author is pretty talented, and I like this novel. It is pretty intriguing and I would recommend everyone to give it a try.
I only read up through chapter ten, but what I read was very good. The punctuation is good, the English could use some work though. The writing was interesting and entertaining. Overall, I would say, "Good job, author! Very nice!"
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Honest Review Another excellent entry! From a pure story perspective, this one is my favorite. The Good: The characters and atmosphere the author creates are very unique and interesting! The world is slowly fed to us instead of just dumping it all on us at once making it easier to digest. The Bad: My brain started to hurt with so many short one line sentences followed by another short one line sentence. In some of the chapters I would say at least 50% of the sentences begin with the word "She". The Neutral: The writing quality is decent, just the overall structure needs a little work. This will get better with time and feedback.
I love how this story is relatable to a real life situation. I love the characters and all. The book is amazing. To improve the book, try re reading and editing. Thanks for a great book.
I liked the concept of the story .a very story line ......good novel ....thank you author for such a beautiful story ......keep up writing .
The story is well detailed, the plot is not twisted in Noway and there is less suspense which make the story more interesting. A shiver ran down my waist when I read the part that Wu Lan died I taught of how the negligence of her father and the cruelty of her step mother led to her death.....I'm glad she got Zen😉, the poor cat....so sad. Overall this is great author __shan, I look forward to more of your stories💋 guess what you made !me love sci-fi fiction... Thanks for that __shan.
This would be a lot better if the grammer was better. There is no editor and it feels like the author never put it through something like grammerly or even into a google docs. There also is no real introduction to the world. Otherwise it’s great.
A really nice story with very unique background and character settings. this book is new to me and i like story as progress plss keep up the good work my fellow author thumbs up :)