The Unvanquished: Child of Nihility

My Apologies🙏🏽.. I'm currently on hiatus–not to rest, but to rebuild. The Unvanquished Child of Nihility is undergoing a complete evolution: deeper world-building, refined lore, and a story shaped to withstand eternity. Morca will return, but not as you knew him. Stronger. Sharper. And with a world no one can ignore. The return isn't rushed–it’s forged in time. Watch for it. Title: Child of Nihility Returns: Only I Remain Unvanquished See you soon... Author Eribor_Samix

I'm trying to carve fiction and blend it seamlessly into reality. After all, isn’t fantasy often more intriguing than the real world? If Webnovel ranked the world's thousands book readers in a single step... You’d see one name at the top: Eribor Samix. Remember it, because soon, I’ll shake the web with my brilliance. I find inspiration when I’m down. Take my first book, Supreme Eternal Star as an example, it might seem rough and slow. But compare it to my latest work, and you'll understand my growths So, read it, and share your thoughts! I welcome both positive and negative feedback, it fuels my progress. And don’t forget to support me!👀

thanks for your reply I am reading your book and wanted to know more about this when are you uploading the next chapter because I am reading it all in one part

you have decided to spam people with your pedantic marketing on my joke comment thinking it would get me to actually read what you have written? Automatic 1 star

Although I would like you not to do that spam. I kinda relate to the desperation so I'm not gonna hold you accountable for that. Is the writing good? It's great! Was I really engaged by the story? Not much. Why? This story seemed to lean more on the serious side. Too serious that I can't seem to have fun. Boom Baam Splash! There need to be some sparks. Of course I won't talk to you about writing since your a contracted author and I'm not, but as a reader, the story seemed kinda flat. I suggest a bit of cliff-hanger and lighthearted tones should be added, well at least on the first few chapters so that the readers will be engaged. But still, It's a great story, just lacking a bit of spice to hook long term readers. (⁠✷⁠‿⁠✷⁠)