In the infinite Multiverse, one Mark Greyson is special. When he was conceived, a soul from a separate reality, meant for reincarnation, fused with his soul. This has specific effects since the soul brought with it a special essence, resulting in a different Mark—more barbaric in a way or maybe not? What this means for Earth, the Multiverse, and the Omniverse as a whole is anyone's guess.

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The synopsis talks about a more barbaric Mark, but I didn't see that, it seemed to me like the same thing, "everything" happens the same way, I thought wow, a meta essence together with a Viltromite physiology, that's going to be interesting, but it seems to me that chatgpt couldn't grasp the idea, how can someone with a barbarian essence have narcolepsy? How is he smaller than Todd? Why does he still work at Burger King? like the original was because he wanted to buy comics and toys and probably Debby wanted to teach him a life lesson and not give him everything, but this Mark said it's to buy food, holy shit, what's the logic in that, what kind of mother wouldn't buy food for her son, I believe that since the AI doesn't have the capacity to reason the basics, it's not because they live in a normal house that they are middle class, Nola is the strongest hero in the world he is rich, if he wants he can catch a meteor and sell it, or turn a piece of coal into a diamond, and Mark works so he doesn't go hungry?


So far I’m loving the ff. You have a good idea going and I think it’ll work well. Mark seems like a new person but we can still see a little of his cannon personality. Nolan and Mark seem like they are gonna get along great. I hope some things stay the same as Cannon but I hope to see Nolan and Mark fight with Mark winning or at least a draw with Nolan staying to help defeat the empire. Because as much as a battle maniac this Mark is he isn’t gonna let anything happen to earth or at least anyone he cares about. 

Hope you keep this and the GL ff going. I’ll be reading 👍🏻🙂

Dude, I'm sorry but this isn't for me.

The idea doesn't make much sense considering the Viltrumite view on weakness and shit, in my opinion. The very moment Nolan understands what the hell narcolepsy is, his knife hands are gonna come slicing away. That's not to say that there aren't good things here, just that it's not one I would personally continue reading.

Its literally just Invincible with a slightly altered mark. rather inconsistent characterization and auth. fills space in chapters by just copying show dialogue word for word.

Its very good, I hope to see someone take advantage of the flaxxan world to train, but none use it/ This story is good due to mc having no filter, down to earth, funny, like the eminem line was just gold. 5 stars

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3.8 it has potential. I thought it was going good but I've been disappointed I'll stick around in hopes smt changes but so far plot is still pretty much same as original with a few differences. I'll update and or delete this review after like 20-30 chaps

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So far all I can say is that it got potential the dialogue is steal and need more depth and personality when it comes to the new mark it well done he’s new but got some of the old personality so he doesn’t feel to OC but the story is lacking the new mark does Everything the old one did and not much has changed 