Douluo Dalu: I Am The True Son of Destiny!

As the Author, I have to be confidence in my works. So, I will give this story a shameless five stars! So, please read my story first, and then give me your opinion and feedbacks!

Well, it’s not bad, but definitely not worthy of a 5-star rating. Mainly because of the grammar, which isn’t unbearable, but still noticeably off. It disrupts the reading flow and makes some of the character interactions feel awkward or unnatural. I’m honestly surprised no one has pointed it out in their reviews, so let me be the one to say it: it’s an issue that really needs attention.

I want to see his revenge against Tang San and Asura.

This author's works are usually very good, and he is also one of the few who is not afraid to break some taboos, and of course, he is also one of the few who makes r-18 content in douluo fics here on the site. Just waiting for revenge against the hypocritical Tang San... After all, it is really hard to like Tang San's contradictory character, especially in the later periods of other Douluo, where he does not even hesitate to hurt his own daughter's soul...

The fanfiction was very good, but the main character made a clone and sent it to another world, and that's how the fanfiction died for me. If you don't care about that, it's worth reading.

If you know nine_cloulds you know his/her fic are top-notch so give it a try and read it, though the only downside is the updates.... Btw author are sure you're not pushing yourself ? I mean you still have 4? Or 5? ongoing ff... I'm going to first save this into my library and let this ff sit in awhile till it has a decent amount of chapters

It's a good FF but it's way too slow like really REALLY slow I'm close to chapter 100 and he's still 7 or 8 years old i really think this needs a time skip I just don't know how you're going to implement that

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good but it is too corny and the fights are sometimes stupid with things like :let's dance: and things like that less corny and things like Ii promise you to look for the future

I don’t understand the unnatural level of hatred towards tang san and asura!!?? Is it normal or is someone manipulating his emotions!!? Cause just because his soul was in tang san body for few moments and then removed by asura’s plan and tang san doesn’t warrent this much of unnatural hate for them and this obsession with revenge as life!! Its forced plot if its not a higher powers manipulation of his emotions!!

The biggest weakness of this story is the lack of depth. All the characters are not 2-dimensional without brains but feel awkward. Maybe because there is too much dialogue? Too little internal thoughts of the characters? All the scenes are presented as they are. So it feels lacking... And I somehow don't feel the satisfaction of seeing the mc show off his powers because it goes by so quickly... I think a story with an OP MC should tell more about the perspective of the people around him than the MC himself. If the author can fix this, I might become addicted to this story.

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The novel is just on another level. I haven't read much of Douluo Dalu's fan-fic, but I doubt there'll be one that surpasses this one. The character development, story, world setting, background, it's all just perfect Mass update please. I'm kind of regretting seeing this novel so early.

new fanfiction novel... since i already know you, author-san. even though i haven't read the first chapter. except for the update schedule, i will give you full marks for your new fanfiction novel.... but if i can wish, can you please update your old novel more often or at least once a month, author-san. i am grateful that you didn't drop your old novel, but with the chapter updates only happening after months have passed, you are like indirectly dropping your old novel, author-san. so if possible please change it, because it would be a shame if such a good novel is not finished.