DxD: Shadow Monarch
"Almighty Monarch.....Your power is too much for this world or this universe to hold you anymore.....we humbly request you to go to another universe"
"..."
"Don't worry... In that universe there is a planet very similar to earth..... except for the fact there are other races called themselves demons, gods, yokai, angels, fallen angels... I am sure you will not get bored"
"..."
"You don't have to worry about this planet......we rulers ensure you that in your absence this planet will be protected by us"
After using a cup of reincarnation and then killing all monarchs for the second time.....sung jin woo who has returned to his teenage form now .......has to make a difficult decision.
He has to go to another universe otherwise the home tries to protect with all his might will perish because of his power.
Even though he has no choice but to decide to leave his home to protect his loved ones
After 700 years...
On some isolated planet...
"System what is this task .....you spoke of?"
An extremely beautiful silver-haired woman wearing maid attire said this while looking at thin air
[ Task: Conquer the heart of shadow monarch ]
[ Time limit: N/A ]
[ Failure Penalty: Extinction of Demon race ]
The woman's silver eyes were wide open in shock as she muttered unconsciously "grayfia.....What kind of mess....you got into?"
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Hello, this is your friendly neighbourhood shinigami with his second fanfic... I just want to tell you this fanfic is based on one possibility I always imagined.....if jin woo had agreed to the ruler's suggestion at that time after killing all the monarchs.
The main heroine- Grayfia Lucifuge and ......more will be coming in future
This is maybe a multiverse story...... depending on the audience.
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This author copied DxD Golden Peerage for the prologue 😂. Changed the Golden Dragon King to the Shadow King. Shameless but I will wait for many chapters and if the story is good I will support this book.
I thought it was good the first few chapters, and then the author or whoever is in charge of the writing decided it would be a good idea to spam "..." every few words and now I can't read it without my inner voice stopping once every few moments. It just ruins the immersion and the grammar started to be subpar. I thought it was an interesting development to have Sung Jin-Woo be in DXD but the process was just ruined. The characters don't act realistically either, and it's just some kind of forced romanced between the two. In my opinion, there's no way that Sung Jin-Woo would ever feel lonely, he's just too mentally strong and advanced for something like that, and he has an extremely strong will. Grayfia also wouldn't really act like this imo, and be more reserved, so it just feels like author forced romance and it sucks.
35 chapters of simpy aids. Trash-tier nonsense at this point in time.
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blatant plagiarism. author with zero creativity. even if you liked and was inspired by golden peerage at least don't copy the chapter word for word.
Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.
I'm already loving this. personality of Jin is really same as the Original Manhwa and i feel like it would be more intresting when he fell in love hehehe.
In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
it's a good story i like it very much I am a grayfia fan so that also the reason I am reading this.also try to add Lilith( wife of orginal Lucifer) to Jin harem and don't drop this midway.
Very short chapters that do not match the publication rate, to add more than 40 chapters and I do not know yet who is the protagonist of this story the title says one but in the story is another 🤦♂️[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Garbage, when I read the title I thought it was going to be a great novel, but it's not, it's a clear copy of the golden nobility, also who is the protagonist? I thought it was Su Jin Woo,Also in the novel he says the gods are afraid of him and that he is too powerful, blah, blah, blah, if we talk about the scale of power at a general level, there are many beings that can kill Su Jin Woo With a single movement, there is a reason why these beings are called gods, they can create lives, destroy and recreate the world, and I don't see the point of them fearing Su Jin Woo.
was expecting a shadow monarch story...... got some of that but it turns into a greyfia story very quickly and while it's written well that was not what was advertised
What the heck did you do tour boy jin woo and the comanders what is with the nerf
I do like the concept of the story, even if the start of the book is an imitation of another book's prologue(that's why I rated the Story Development as 4 stars despite that fact). I wanted to read a fanfic where the MC is Jin-woo, so I had a bit of expectation for this one. However, I'll be blunt, the author's poor construction of grammar just turns me off. There are wrong spellings and misuse of words. The author doesn't know how to use apostrophes. And the thing that just frustrates me so much when I'm reading is the frequent use of ellipses. It's SO annoying. The author uses ellipses in every paragraph. I don't think he knows how to use commas, so he just replaces them with ellipses. Smh... Writing Quality - 2 stars Story Development - 4 stars Character Design - 4 stars Updating Stability - 3 stars World Background - 4 stars
Well, I don't remember what I give to a golden peerage, something around 3 stars. Because Idea that this old all - powerful dude being a braindead simp, is extremely infuriating for me. Like come on, you have thousand of years to think about others, about yourself, but you was just too focused on sleeping and r#tatred, is that idea? Where do you find such clown? And lo and behold, exactly the same thing but with shadow monarch... Apparently, he was strangled in his lonesome life for a 700 year, having a great power and understanding, but couldn't come up with any way to find new planet for himself, or somehow seal himself to go back. Okay, fine... I could believe in that, he was a fighter, not a thinker. But somehow, he doesn't change much In character in this 70p years of his life, and start to simp in the first Lady that he found out on a realm... Sigh...Wow, as pathetic as richter(or whatever this dumb lizard was called) . Subarashi. And as author role model, it's too have a lot of weird errors about dxd world. Like author doesn't even try to read wiki, and just use whatever he remembered from other fanfics. Bruuuh. And it's written badly on top all of this... So yeah, original was trash, and now there is botleg copy of that. I don't know what to think...