DxD: Shadow Monarch

This author copied DxD Golden Peerage for the prologue 😂. Changed the Golden Dragon King to the Shadow King. Shameless but I will wait for many chapters and if the story is good I will support this book.

I thought it was good the first few chapters, and then the author or whoever is in charge of the writing decided it would be a good idea to spam "..." every few words and now I can't read it without my inner voice stopping once every few moments. It just ruins the immersion and the grammar started to be subpar. I thought it was an interesting development to have Sung Jin-Woo be in DXD but the process was just ruined. The characters don't act realistically either, and it's just some kind of forced romanced between the two. In my opinion, there's no way that Sung Jin-Woo would ever feel lonely, he's just too mentally strong and advanced for something like that, and he has an extremely strong will. Grayfia also wouldn't really act like this imo, and be more reserved, so it just feels like author forced romance and it sucks.

35 chapters of simpy aids. Trash-tier nonsense at this point in time.

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blatant plagiarism. author with zero creativity. even if you liked and was inspired by golden peerage at least don't copy the chapter word for word.

Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.

In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I'm already loving this. personality of Jin is really same as the Original Manhwa and i feel like it would be more intresting when he fell in love hehehe.

What the heck did you do tour boy jin woo and the comanders what is with the nerf

Very short chapters that do not match the publication rate, to add more than 40 chapters and I do not know yet who is the protagonist of this story the title says one but in the story is another 🤦‍♂️[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

it's a good story i like it very much I am a grayfia fan so that also the reason I am reading this.also try to add Lilith( wife of orginal Lucifer) to Jin harem and don't drop this midway.

was expecting a shadow monarch story...... got some of that but it turns into a greyfia story very quickly and while it's written well that was not what was advertised

Garbage, when I read the title I thought it was going to be a great novel, but it's not, it's a clear copy of the golden nobility, also who is the protagonist? I thought it was Su Jin Woo,Also in the novel he says the gods are afraid of him and that he is too powerful, blah, blah, blah, if we talk about the scale of power at a general level, there are many beings that can kill Su Jin Woo With a single movement, there is a reason why these beings are called gods, they can create lives, destroy and recreate the world, and I don't see the point of them fearing Su Jin Woo.

The theme is interesting, but the way it is executed leaves a lot to be desired, the chapters need editing. But more problematic than that, the MC's personality has nothing to do with Jinwoo, it seems that someone (generic) went into the body of the shadow monarch and now tries to live like him, and without intelligence too... Funny... I expected something similar to the DXD:Golden fanfic... and really if you include jinwoo it would make a very interesting finfic, I hope the author is successful in this endeavor hahaha