In an alternate wizarding world, Arthur Damian Reeves is the "Boy Who Lived" after his parents' tragic fate. Slytherin-born and gifted with metamorphmagus abilities, he seeks vengeance against Voldemort while forming surprising friendships.
Unique premise for HP fanfic but the flow and character development is inconsistent. Trying to be dark or edgy when it would be better to build the character through actually saying what happened. It is making it disjointed and tough to really become invested despite how much I like the story that I can decipher. Criticism aside, I’ll keep reeding to see where it goes. Thanks.
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Thank you for your hard work author.Will there be romance, and if so, will there be a harem?
Unique premise for HP fanfic but the flow and character development is inconsistent. Trying to be dark or edgy when it would be better to build the character through actually saying what happened. It is making it disjointed and tough to really become invested despite how much I like the story that I can decipher. Criticism aside, I’ll keep reeding to see where it goes. Thanks.
Thank you for your hard work author.Will there be romance, and if so, will there be a harem?