Five fighters are on a collision course with fate and one another in a galaxy where arena battle is the ultimate show. En route to the high-stakes Sylis Cup tournament, a stoic executioner, a charming rogue, a pragmatic scion, a rugged survivor, and a stealthy hybrid board the spacecraft Kyara. They put their deadly abilities to the test in a state-of-the-art combat simulator where simulated battles cause actual wounds, complete with hyperspace jumps and vicious opening fights. This unusual company, forged by fate and honed by rivalry, must negotiate perilous relationships and lethal arenas where only the most resilient—or fortunate—survive.
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-Explanations in parentheses within the chapters are made to strengthen and elaborate the story.
-Section headings will generally consist of one word. So I can keep the mystery at a high tone.
-I wrote this book for WPC 2025, and I would like to thank Web Novel for motivating me to write this book.
While the narrative occasionally relies on exposition to convey necessary background information or lore, and some plot developments might feel slightly opportune in their convenience, the overall trajectory is strong. This portion of the work successfully builds reader investment in the characters' journey and establishes a promising foundation for future events, leaving a clear sense of anticipation. The handling of action sequences, particularly in structured combat scenarios, is a notable strength.
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The story's progression is generally fluid and intriguing. The challenges the team faces and their methods for overcoming them are interesting. The characters' interactions during moments of danger as well as more relaxed (and humorous) times help us better understand their bonds and personalities. However, some events (especially escape and rescue moments) can occasionally feel a bit too coincidental or easily resolved. Additionally, sudden tonal shifts, like the prank war following a high-tension operation, might seem a bit odd to some readers, although it can be said to serve character development. The new character Zayn offering a quick solution to the team's problems, while advancing the story, also feels somewhat like an abrupt savior. Overall, these chapters move the story forward excitingly, develop the characters, and expand the universe. It was definitely enjoyable and engaging to read. Score: 4.5 / 5
Getting to spend more time at the Ravy complex and seeing the Kyara get its refit was awesome world-building. I'm really enjoying how the team dynamics are developing; seeing them settle in, interact with the family, and then start training with their new Elemental affiliations has been great fun. That whole system is super intriguing, and watching them choose their paths and start customizing their gear and thinking about tactics accordingly is one of my favorite parts. It adds such a unique layer to the sci-fi setting. The plot itself is getting really interesting too! The way things unfolded with the government officials and the mission they've been given has definitely raised the stakes and promises some exciting, high-tension situations ahead. It feels like the story is moving into a really significant new phase, and the recent events have set the stage perfectly. Honestly, these chapters were incredibly engaging. There's a great mix of character development, cool tech, intriguing world elements, and a plot that keeps you hooked. I'm completely invested in this crew and their journey. Can't wait to read what happens next! This is shaping up to be a fantastic ride.
Fairly mediocre read. Nothing that's offensively bad, though also nothing special, creative or particularly good. The book can still evolve
Love the story and the pace. Also very different from most novels on here. Very refreshing and new feel reading it. Anyone have any stories that are similar?
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It's one of the best new novels I've read on this site, The story development could be better, but I'm sure that will come as the author grows. The characters so far seem to be well thought out , but I would love some more background info on them. Overall, this novel has a lot of potential, I'll definitely be keeping up with it hopefully until the end.
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The story is moving along at a really good speed, not slow at all. There was some cool action, sneaking around, and then that whole part with the arena starting up. It kept me interested the whole time. It's just fun to read right now. You've got the main mission, but also the characters dealing with stuff and this new competition. It feels like a lot is happening, but in a good way. I won't spoil anything, but things are definitely getting intense and interesting! Really enjoying where the story is going. Can't wait for more!