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3 days ago
7
YetiTheReader
This story has an interesting concept, but its just AI, you can tell that the story is completely written by AI without any input or edit from the Author.
1. In the first chapter the baby is clearly called Jon Snow, but every character and the narrator referes to him as Gojo.
2. It's an endless repetition, the story is completely mechanical there is diversity of pronouns, adjectives etc. Just robotic AI writing.
3. The logic is completely thrown about the window and there's absolutely no world building, besides the story being rushed
4. You can not tell how old the MC is because there is not development of the character and the surrounding environment and there is no mention of his age, but every new chapter it feels like months or years passed with how rushed the writing is.
Its an interesting story but the development is terrible, if the author actually spends some effort into writing the story instead of a 30 secs AI prompt the story could be good.
Terrible. Made 100% by AI, in the first chapter the protagonist is named Jon, but in the next chapter he's suddenly called Gojo. The story is completely rushed.
a day ago
0
Daoist920010
Mcs like really dumb he uncovers a plot that has lasted for thousands of yearss leading to a enemy possibly more powerful than sukuna and despite this going on for over 10 thousand years he decides not to wait to grow up but fight this threat as what a 3 or 5 five year old who can’t even use infinity the only reason he’s still alive is that they want his body and didn’t know about his rc healing and massive plot armor
2 days ago
0
Reiya9
Boeing story written by an AI. Just repetitive and monotonous storytelling
Thank you guys for the support if you find this story intresting please write a review to motivate me
This story has an interesting concept, but its just AI, you can tell that the story is completely written by AI without any input or edit from the Author. 1. In the first chapter the baby is clearly called Jon Snow, but every character and the narrator referes to him as Gojo. 2. It's an endless repetition, the story is completely mechanical there is diversity of pronouns, adjectives etc. Just robotic AI writing. 3. The logic is completely thrown about the window and there's absolutely no world building, besides the story being rushed 4. You can not tell how old the MC is because there is not development of the character and the surrounding environment and there is no mention of his age, but every new chapter it feels like months or years passed with how rushed the writing is. Its an interesting story but the development is terrible, if the author actually spends some effort into writing the story instead of a 30 secs AI prompt the story could be good.
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Terrible. Made 100% by AI, in the first chapter the protagonist is named Jon, but in the next chapter he's suddenly called Gojo. The story is completely rushed.
Mcs like really dumb he uncovers a plot that has lasted for thousands of yearss leading to a enemy possibly more powerful than sukuna and despite this going on for over 10 thousand years he decides not to wait to grow up but fight this threat as what a 3 or 5 five year old who can’t even use infinity the only reason he’s still alive is that they want his body and didn’t know about his rc healing and massive plot armor
Boeing story written by an AI. Just repetitive and monotonous storytelling