DepressedMage

"Who would have thought that one ordinary review could instantly fuck your life? Definitely not me"

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Luke was your average teenage boy—with an unhealthy obsession for light novels.
After finishing a new read titled “The Hero’s Obsessed Harem,” he jumped online to post a review. His biggest issue? The so-called “hero” kept stealing other men’s love interests, and somehow, the story praised him for it.

Right after posting the review, he got an odd reply from the author:
“You think my book is flawed? I’ll make you regret that.”

Luke brushed it off as a salty writer who couldn’t handle criticism—until everything went dark.

The next time he opened his eyes, he was in the body of Riven Von Grave, the fourth son of the low-ranking Grave baron family—an irrelevant extra in The Hero’s Obsessed Harem. Riven was a forgotten character, engaged to three duke’s daughters since childhood, only for all three to abandon him for the so-called hero. And to make matters worse, he was fated to die in a war against demons—utterly forgotten.

But Luke isn’t having any of it.

Screw fate.
Screw the plot.
And most of all, screw the author who threw him into this mess.

Armed with a mysterious system and pure spite, Riven is going to rewrite his destiny, and win back his fiancées as well. 

But with every change Riven makes, he changes the story, and pulls a calamity bigger than the demons toward them. What will he do when he realizes the impending doom, will he be able to fix his own mistakes?

An Extra's POV: My Three Fiancees Hate Me

"Your classes will begin at the start of a new week, which is two days from now. You have all the time to get used to the academy and the rules. And now, without further waste of time, your strips will show up on your strip," Sally said.

Immediately, the strips of everyone in the Hall started lighting up with numbers, showing which rank they got.

Riven barely paid attention to his own, but when his number showed, he immediately covered his strip out of panic.

He looked around to be sure no one saw. When he was certain that nobody saw, he relaxed—only for Noel to lean in close to his ear, "I saw it. Number one," he whispered.

Riven felt his heartbeat skip for a moment, but then he realized that it was Noel. He glanced at Noel's strip and saw the number five boldly showing.

"I can't believe my junior brother not only defeated me but also took the top spot in the academy. My pride feels hurt," Noel said.

Rank 1