An Extra's POV: My Three Fiancees Hate Me
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"Who would have thought that one ordinary review could instantly fuck your life? Definitely not me"
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Luke was your average teenage boy—with an unhealthy obsession for light novels.
After finishing a new read titled “The Hero’s Obsessed Harem,” he jumped online to post a review. His biggest issue? The so-called “hero” kept stealing other men’s love interests, and somehow, the story praised him for it.
Right after posting the review, he got an odd reply from the author:
“You think my book is flawed? I’ll make you regret that.”
Luke brushed it off as a salty writer who couldn’t handle criticism—until everything went dark.
The next time he opened his eyes, he was in the body of Riven Von Grave, the fourth son of the low-ranking Grave baron family—an irrelevant extra in The Hero’s Obsessed Harem. Riven was a forgotten character, engaged to three duke’s daughters since childhood, only for all three to abandon him for the so-called hero. And to make matters worse, he was fated to die in a war against demons—utterly forgotten.
But Luke isn’t having any of it.
Screw fate.
Screw the plot.
And most of all, screw the author who threw him into this mess.
Armed with a mysterious system and pure spite, Riven is going to rewrite his destiny, and win back his fiancées as well.
But with every change Riven makes, he changes the story, and pulls a calamity bigger than the demons toward them. What will he do when he realizes the impending doom, will he be able to fix his own mistakes?
So now, the compulsory author review. i don't really have much to say about the book, just that every chapter takes a lot of time and thinking to craft, so when you read, drop a comment, so that way i know how to better the story
If you ask me for my opinion on this novel? One word: cliché. This is the kind of story with a pattern that is used too often—an MC who writes comments on a novel, then suddenly gets transported into the world of that novel. Sound familiar? Wait, there's more. The MC doesn't become the main character, but merely a background character or NPC. Then, as you might guess, the MC's fiancés hate him. After that, the main character from the novel's world comes and steals the MC's fiancés one by one. Cliché upon cliché. In the end, the MC starts to work hard, develops, and somehow the fiancés begin to fall for him. Very predictable. Very… very cliché. Stories like this can be found everywhere—in Korean novels, Chinese novels, and even on Webnovel, as far as I know, there are many with this kind of pattern. Maybe, just maybe, the quality of the writing is strong enough to cover up that cliché. Perhaps the mystery is intriguing. Or maybe the MC's personality is distinctive enough to make this story feel fresher. But one thing is for sure: this is a cliché novel. Like it or not, that's up to you. I can only hope that the author can bring something different to this old formula. Good luck, author!
As the main character grows stronger, people irrationally deny his achievements, accuse him without reason, and hate him for no clear cause. It feels like all the characters are becoming increasingly foolish, and I really hope this trend doesn’t continue.
30 chs in and it’s pretty good and well paced
well to be honest this novel have great potential to became the best Novel over time
Let's write a review for this Author's novel. Oh no, he replied with a threat. What is this? I entered the Book? Great, let's change the fate of this Body, of course by being good on the first day. Of course no one suspects, why? Because they are STUPID and the author doesn't bother to think.
i love it. because I'm an impatient person I wish I didn't stumble on this gem this early anyway after finishing the 37 chapters I will probably leave for maybe a month to stack the chapters . so I've read 20+ Chapters and it is really good 👍😊 . give it a try trust me u will not regret it
I love the authors writing style so much. Honestly, this should become a banger, it’s a gem.
Be warned: the title was not lying. They really do hate him😭 The protagonist is unusual for the genre in the aspect that he seems to be fishing for approval as apposed to other protagonists who do not give a flip about anyone but a few characters that the mc liked before they were reincarnated. I really don’t know why the author titled it “my fiancees hate me.” Like isn’t that supposed to be a temporary state of affairs rather than the permanent title of the book?
alright so I'll be honest I don't read much with an R18 tag as it's usually a DNR from me but this is actually a good story so I'm going to continue reading and see how this goes hopefully this author doesn't just randomly decide to make the Mc too much of an idiot like some others. I'm pretty excited to see how this goes in the future.
Honestly, I enjoyed the majority of the story; it had great writing and character development. But sadly, the MC went around stealing the lovers of other men, acting like a man without control. Honestly, after reading the entire series, I thought the MC would change at some point, but he kept doing it.