DepressedMage

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"Who would have thought that one ordinary review could instantly fuck your life? Definitely not me"

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Luke was your average teenage boy—with an unhealthy obsession for light novels.
After finishing a new read titled “The Hero’s Obsessed Harem,” he jumped online to post a review. His biggest issue? The so-called “hero” kept stealing other men’s love interests, and somehow, the story praised him for it.

Right after posting the review, he got an odd reply from the author:
“You think my book is flawed? I’ll make you regret that.”

Luke brushed it off as a salty writer who couldn’t handle criticism—until everything went dark.

The next time he opened his eyes, he was in the body of Riven Von Grave, the fourth son of the low-ranking Grave baron family—an irrelevant extra in The Hero’s Obsessed Harem. Riven was a forgotten character, engaged to three duke’s daughters since childhood, only for all three to abandon him for the so-called hero. And to make matters worse, he was fated to die in a war against demons—utterly forgotten.

But Luke isn’t having any of it.

Screw fate.
Screw the plot.
And most of all, screw the author who threw him into this mess.

Armed with a mysterious system and pure spite, Riven is going to rewrite his destiny, and win back his fiancées as well. 

But with every change Riven makes, he changes the story, and pulls a calamity bigger than the demons toward them. What will he do when he realizes the impending doom, will he be able to fix his own mistakes?

An Extra's POV: My Three Fiancees Hate Me

"Ha, humans think they are the center of everything," she said.

She pushed down with her sword, pushing Quin back a few steps. She attacked, slashing with a flurry of attacks, but Quin blocked all of them with ease.

"You are really good, I have to say, Quin, but not good enough," she said with a smile and stabbed. Her sword glowed blood red. Quin parried the stab, yet somehow a slash formed on the side of his stomach.

His eyes glanced at the wound and back at her. "You have some tricks. Sadly, I'm tired of this," Quin said and attacked. She tried to block, but her sword passed through him.

"Behind you," he said before slashing. She blocked at the last moment but was thrown back. She managed to stop midair, flying with her wings, but just as she stopped, Quin appeared behind her and slashed again.

She couldn't block the attack and was sent down like a meteor. She slammed into the ground and formed a massive crater.

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