DepressedMage

"Who would have thought that one ordinary review could instantly fuck your life? Definitely not me"

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Luke was your average teenage boy—with an unhealthy obsession for light novels.
After finishing a new read titled “The Hero’s Obsessed Harem,” he jumped online to post a review. His biggest issue? The so-called “hero” kept stealing other men’s love interests, and somehow, the story praised him for it.

Right after posting the review, he got an odd reply from the author:
“You think my book is flawed? I’ll make you regret that.”

Luke brushed it off as a salty writer who couldn’t handle criticism—until everything went dark.

The next time he opened his eyes, he was in the body of Riven Von Grave, the fourth son of the low-ranking Grave baron family—an irrelevant extra in The Hero’s Obsessed Harem. Riven was a forgotten character, engaged to three duke’s daughters since childhood, only for all three to abandon him for the so-called hero. And to make matters worse, he was fated to die in a war against demons—utterly forgotten.

But Luke isn’t having any of it.

Screw fate.
Screw the plot.
And most of all, screw the author who threw him into this mess.

Armed with a mysterious system and pure spite, Riven is going to rewrite his destiny, and win back his fiancées as well. 

But with every change Riven makes, he changes the story, and pulls a calamity bigger than the demons toward them. What will he do when he realizes the impending doom, will he be able to fix his own mistakes?

An Extra's POV: My Three Fiancees Hate Me

Blaze moved first, blitzing from where he stood. His speed was so fast they could barely react to it. Liana saw him appear before her, her eyes widened, she couldn't react, his fist was already approaching her.

Riven managed to get there in time, blocking the attack with his sword, but the force behind that attack wasn't light. His sword was trembling from the force. He gritted his teeth.

"Arghhhhhhhh." He roared, putting all his strength to push the hand back. The hand swung back, but Blaze immediately came in with the second hand, sending a punch right into Riven's guts.

Riven arched backwards, coughing out blood. His body shot through the air and slammed into the ceiling, and before he could fall down, Blaze went in with another punch, hitting Riven right in the head and sending him flying across the corridor.

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