Re: Zero The Great Sage

As an Author It's my right to give my fic an obligatory five-star review. Now that I have given my review shouldn't you all give me your reviews as well? While I am the most satisfied existence in this world and ask little of you. However, if you do not give this fic a good review you are infringing my rights as an exemplary author! Shouldn't you introduce yourself? Shouldn't you comment what you like about this fic? Isn't that common sense? Also, who gives those poor reviews and introduce themselves with gibberish? Have I not introduced myself properly? Shouldn't as a sane reader you should do the same? If not, that is infringement to my rights! Yes, I am the most satisfied existence, the most satisfied existence in the entire world, yet even I have limits to patience. So respect my rights as an individual and rate this fic with a good review!

All right, let's go over all the points one by one. Pops Knuckles* Writing Quality- 3/5; The writing quality is... decent. I say decent, but in truth, it's far better than most things you can't find here. It is easy to read and intelligible but there are many typos in the first couple of chapters that may throw off immersion. The way the story is presented also feels kind of.. bland? I don't think that's the word to use, but it falls short in many regards and situations where it's supposed to shine the most. The way situations are handled and fights take place are alright, but they can feel rushed and overall, a bit tasteless. no others nitpicks. Story Developments- 4/5; The story is mostly the same, except that Subaru now has strength. Now, there are a lot of things that are different, and the story is genuinely fun to read. it's one of those which makes you not think too hard and just enjoy the ride. it's not trying to tackle the nuances of the original, neither is it trying to shove into your face how bleak actually getting reincarnated would be and it does so greatly. There are many things I find wrong with the story however. Reinhard being a girl was not something that peeved me, but the fact that she fell for Subaru within their first meeting was a bit of a... turnoff. That's only my opinion though that some people might enjoy that so, yeah. It's a harem, not to my taste but I'm not going to let that influence the last score. But here's the main problem. There's very little... potential in terms of tension. Basically any problem can be solved by dying a few times and that's that. I'm not sure how much the shelflife of such a story can be, but if it continues on, which I hope it does, I do think the author will hit a wall on how to keep the story engaging; in my personal opinion as a fellow author. I would have given this 3 stars, but the story grows on you, so 4. Character Design- 3/5; the Character's aren't... very likable. The Mc is only likable because he's the Mc and we see him in our place. He's going around growing in strength but he doesn't really have a goal in mind. He's only going along the ride. Many a times, He's said that he values his own life a lot, but there's many other times when he makes decisions that put himself in deliberate danger out of sheer stupidity when he doesn't even realize he has any new powers. His decision to support Emilia are also vague at best. His sole motivation is so that Puck doesn't destroy the world, which is improbable since Reinhard is a literal nuke. Other than that, Ram is for some reason in love with roswal when she only ever falls in love with him after Rem gets erased, but I won't deduct any points for that. Update Stability- 5/5; Chef's Kiss* World Background- 5/5; I mean, it's re zero. Overall- 4/5; A work that's enjoyable to read and grows on you as you read it. Grammer gets better with time and overall, it's a fun experience if you're a re zero fan. Might be hard to get through the first and second arc though so that's that. Please finish this author! cheers~~

Please make sure to continue this fanfic and not drop it....it has a lot of potential and could be really good. Plus there aren't that many good re:zero fanfics.

keep up the amazing work looking forward to more chapters 💯💯

truly! by my right as most unsatisfied reader i will give u 1 star even if its a good novel even if i check my liberary 6 times a day to check ur story is updated or not even if its the best re:zero si fanfic in the whole damn website kidding lol! gimme more chaptrs plz

Very good writing quality plus entertainment plots! it's good to be able to read re:zero fanfic like this...

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The story is very interesting and the way the author decided to make a useless Subaru fighter is very good, as I stopped watching anime because of its usefulness.

the main reason i am giving this 5 stars is beacuse you are writing this, here almost everyone just wants to make money and translate chinese novels that too with AI, atleast you are trying to write

Personally, I don’t enjoy the story much. The concept is interesting, and the protagonist’s power is well thought out and fitting. However, the way the main character interacts with others feels unrealistic, and their personality comes off as exaggerated or inconsistent. I understand it’s fanfiction, so some level of deviation is expected, but even with that in mind, the protagonist feels more like a cartoon than a believable person. I struggled to connect with them or understand their decisions and thought processes. That said, I wish you the best with your story. It’s not bad, it’s just not for me

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Finally a good re:zero novel thank you author and keep it up you have my review and my powerstones

GREAT NOVEL ......................... ......................... KEEP IT UP

Honestly this story is pretty great! There aren't many good Re:Zero fanfics so finally seeing one, especially with its own unique story line, automatically made me rate it five stars. The MC fully utilizes everything he knows about the story and actually has a brain which makes it even more enjoyable to read. The author also does a great job at making the MC feel like the Subaru we know and at the same time feel like like a different person! This story has a lot of potential and i Can't wait to see what happens next!