Naruto: Reborn as Neji Hyuga After Dying in One Piece

Everything related to the system sucks, as for the story - it's not bad for now (ch. 14). .

Seemed interesting at first, but there’s nothing, okay form, no background, nothing to stand on. Neji is too focused on his empty goals. Reading this is just like a job, and I work enough during the day.

It was fine until he built an artificial Byakugan while being blind and proposed a plan to fund a lab by just a hotpot restaurant income. Shit went very bad so fast.

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How the hell he regro his eyes.👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

a very good story continues like this, you take your time, but I only ask that you don't leave the story.

Nomnomnom good read!! I really like that we have Neji as a protag, especially having a much better relationship with Hinata-- it's a balm in the soul, truly! Wish fulfillment and all. But still, Neji x Tenten for the win!!

Reading Status: C66 Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 3/5 World Background 3/5 Total Score: 3.6 The story idea is good, with a decent protagonist. But sometimes there were leaps of logic that were a bit excessive from a reader's perspective, random decisions, and plot holes. What I disliked most were the sudden gender swaps and the "fun" pairings that followed. The MC's own decisions and the interactions between the characters only got worse over time, as if everything was simply going downhill. I had high expectations; the idea was great, but the execution could be much better. The innuendos and pairings between the characters after the gender swap were simply the straw that broke the camel's back. I completely lost interest, but up until these final moments, it was a read that served me well to kill time.

there is nothing at all... some random shitty slice of life

So good!! Looking forward for more!! Also!!!! Tenten x Neji for the wiiiiin!! Thanks for the update, Author! Patiently waiting for moooooooore~!!

So far so good!, I'm lookin foreward to how this story goes and how much impact it would create kukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukukuku

rn its pretty good it has potential I don't like the Mc decision and softness for now but we'll see.

not bad for the first 10 ch i reckon but aside from giving info about being from one piece world... everything is bs... wtf is that lvl system... wtf are those skills given every lvl... and the plot is getting more bs

This fanfic has huge potential.... The author really picked up a good story Maybe more updates regulary would be better.....................