The Berserker's Vote

It was a good start, too bad there's only 3 chapters atm. Looking forward to the next updates, good luck, author! :3

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

The book is interesting, I think I'm in for it. Looking forward to more uploads would gladly read it . As an author, will recommend your book for support

It's quite interesting for a beginner...has potential and I'm glad I stumbled across it. You left me on a cliff hanger, hoping for more chapters soon author

It’s seems interesting as you can tell there’s an already well established dynamic between characters. The promise of lots of chapters is great for those who want a long series and the glossary will be helpful. However, there are a lot of typos. I think it may be a copy paste error. Other than that it’s a good read.

The story starts off well and seems interesting. Without a doubt, it has a lot of potential to be a great milestone. I'll be watching the caps.

Nice beginning, It holds future potential, I most especially love the start. Sincerely hope it gets contracted. Good luck author [img=recommend]

Am a sucker for such stories like Damon And how the stories going and the plot If i continue i might spoil so i judge a solid read

First thing don't stop writing this story. I hope you will continue with more chapters. Now let's talk about your story. I love how you start with details it really hooked me, though I'm not sure about others. But remember, too many details can sometimes feel a bit draggy.Other than that it's good! I'm waiting for the next chapter.

The book is very interesting, the world building and emotional suspense is amazing Has potential to be a great fantasy novel

Dear author, I like how the idoims were put in the story. It adds mystery and uniqueness to the characters and the book itself. It's a good book. Although there are mishaps along the words but it didn't make the story bad. Good job.

nice story great development hoping to see more.

I like this kind of stories, i can feel that it'll be having extraordinary plots on the long run. How even in the first chapter the character has captivating aura. And ending it with a dialogue that is intriguing for many is 👏. 😁

To be honest. Thought this would like one of them damn cliches , would be collecting pal. Keep up the good work .