Write longer chapters this was incredibly short and i was just getting immersed in the story and then the chapter ended way too short. The story is interesting and characters are unique with the several factions but you should have a definite end that feels good when the chapter ends or leaves you yearning for more. This writing style is bland as it ends so quickly and the stories are too short as a result if you had made the chapter much longer it would be much better.
19 days ago
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cychochic_mueheh3
okay I'll do this review thing all over again (giving 5 stars cuz why not)
guys, as you may know, chapters are getting delayed and I'm sorry for that, but i promise (this is the last), I'll be focusing now, there's no more reason for me to be busy because it's already vacation time(I'm a student of course)... thanks for the ones that will support this
Write longer chapters this was incredibly short and i was just getting immersed in the story and then the chapter ended way too short. The story is interesting and characters are unique with the several factions but you should have a definite end that feels good when the chapter ends or leaves you yearning for more. This writing style is bland as it ends so quickly and the stories are too short as a result if you had made the chapter much longer it would be much better.
okay I'll do this review thing all over again (giving 5 stars cuz why not) guys, as you may know, chapters are getting delayed and I'm sorry for that, but i promise (this is the last), I'll be focusing now, there's no more reason for me to be busy because it's already vacation time(I'm a student of course)... thanks for the ones that will support this