The Game's Extra: Azhriel Odyssey
A boy born with the potential, so great that it threatend the world's powerhouses itself.
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Born amidst chaos and tragedy, Azhrael, the son of the legendary Frost King and Celestial Witch, carries a burden no child should bear. Half of his soul was dormant into another world, while the other half was left sealed, hidden from the prying eyes of those who sought to destroy him.
He was a child of immense potential—his very existence threatened gods and shook the balance of power in the world.
However in the main story, Azhrael was only an "extra." A mysterious beautiful boy with snow-white hair and dull grey eyes who exists in the shadow of others, bullied and beaten, unaware of the legacy he carries.
That Is Until.
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Guys, don't decide to read or not just cuz of the harem tag y'know. Just read the free chaps and you will get it.
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You know what the novel is decent. As you go along I can see improvements gradually come. You and this novel definitely have potential. Though I would recommend after a while going back to change early chapters since the first couple chapters I won’t lie are quite underwhelming in my opinion at least. Just keep writing for now and keep up the good work.
It's another cheap copy of some revenge-type son-of-luck story where the MC is going through an awakening in a forbidden land, and then some hidden old powerhouse "coincidentally" spots the MC, sees through their potential, and then starts insulting and taunting the MC like they are doing it for his good before accepting him as his disciple.
idk y ppl hating but I like this post more often :)
Oops I apologize for the one star when I only read only 10 chapters but I actually like the story is trying to tell but the execution is quite mediocre to my taste. Should I tell in detail about the pros and cons? Why bother when I just read only 10 chapters, unless the author asks it.
Hope this one gets more updates has potential
it's a good story it has potential I hope you keep writing and not drop it