Shroud of Control
Author: Ezio551199
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Read first chapter. Your story has potential. It's just that the cover doesn't fit, and the synopsis is just wrong. The synopsis should tell about the world, yes. However, it should also tell us about the Main Character. Webnovels are about the Main Characters. The more interesting the Main Character is, the more interesting your story will be. Read any book here on Webnovel and see. They all focus on the MC. I advise you to restructure. Good luck!