The Young Noble Ascendant

Hello Reader's !... thank's for reading this book, and please give me 5 star, i will update everyday for this Novel 😁

Too early, only have one chapter :v Still it's a good start, I'll suggest adding sound effects to smoothen the pace and transition :3 Good luck on this, author!

Your story's really good and unique. I like how the main character's goal is really well established. The only piece of advice I have is to work on some of the grammar and sentence structure, although that might no longer be a problem. I'll see when I manage to fully catch up. Overall though, good job.

Hmm... The world building is good so far but there's a lot of things that you need to work on. You switch between present and past tense constantly. It's best to just stick to one. Keep working on it -- the story has potential!

Its' good, very good, though there are a few areas that need fixing to make it more attractive and reader drawing. But, overall keep it up ❤️‍🩹🔥

I think your story idea is nice, you should try giving detailed story development for his previous world before he died, but you're really good. Keep it up

Damn, such a pity for your fate, Rey or Theo. This story is very interesting and fresh, I like it

I like your idea of reincarnation and his family disappeared, but u need to work hard on how will the Mc use his old knowledge

This book is great. Simply a potential masterpiece and I'm not kidding. I will add this to library and return to it once more when I have gorlt enough time.

This Is Quite Astounding I Really Liked It, And I Recommend Others To Also Read. It's Super Great, Trust Me.

Good story, very good. The Beginning was really captivating, funny😂 but also interesting. And the world background is really incredible, i personally like it. Good work, author💯🔥 I recommend this for you guys, you'll love it

well, I love the premise and start. definitely eye catching, I'm rooting for you, author!

This is an interesting story. I especially like the MC, he fights his trauma and starts his second life with hard work. I also like his class which is architect, I think he will be a great and strong MC. Good luck author!

Eeeepppp love me some good reincarnation novels. Read it read it read it. Only a few chapters in and I already wanna keep reading.