Tragically killed in a cruel world, Rey awakens in the body of a young noble named Theo Von Caerstellar—in a foreign land on the brink of chaos. Gifted with extraordinary intelligence, Theo vows to protect his family and exact revenge on the treacherous nobility. This marks the beginning of a brilliant young lord’s journey—one that will shake the very foundations of aristocracy!
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Too early, only have one chapter :v Still it's a good start, I'll suggest adding sound effects to smoothen the pace and transition :3 Good luck on this, author!
Hmm... The world building is good so far but there's a lot of things that you need to work on. You switch between present and past tense constantly. It's best to just stick to one. Keep working on it -- the story has potential!
Its' good, very good, though there are a few areas that need fixing to make it more attractive and reader drawing. But, overall keep it up ❤️🩹🔥
I think your story idea is nice, you should try giving detailed story development for his previous world before he died, but you're really good. Keep it up
Damn, such a pity for your fate, Rey or Theo. This story is very interesting and fresh, I like it
I like your idea of reincarnation and his family disappeared, but u need to work hard on how will the Mc use his old knowledge
The MC feels cold to me. But other than that, everything is looking great! The story is easy to follow, clear and concise. Pacing is excellent. The only thing that's missing for me is that, the MC is too cold. LMAO. I think he needs a jacket. To keep him warm. Give this a read! Add to your libraries now!