Alright where to start. Story is good and has a strong plot. It’s just not all there yet in my mind. Still could use some work on background building and more explanation. If you read this comment give the novel a read because I believe it has potential.
Alright where to start. Story is good and has a strong plot. It’s just not all there yet in my mind. Still could use some work on background building and more explanation. If you read this comment give the novel a read because I believe it has potential.