1.Too much cursing.
2.Not a whole lot going on
3. Not a use of even a single punctuation marks.
4. Reading this will make you feel like nothing. That's how much boring it is.
5. Too much yapping and yapping
6. There is probably is rewrite coming for this because this version sucks.
7. Having a brain is a crime on this one.
All in all if you can turn off your brian and read then this is for you.
a month ago
5
Reader98555
Those who use audio mode know why its bad
a month ago
5
Kushagra_Singh_7452
is it movie or comics please be comics
liking it so far
a month ago
3
uv_uv
good so far
I like it.
please keep up with regular updates
a month ago
2
ErickHenrique_BR
mc is very stupid, this is simply the worst fanfic, where the author uses the Omnitrix in the worst way I've ever seen, in fact he barely uses it.
1.Too much cursing. 2.Not a whole lot going on 3. Not a use of even a single punctuation marks. 4. Reading this will make you feel like nothing. That's how much boring it is. 5. Too much yapping and yapping 6. There is probably is rewrite coming for this because this version sucks. 7. Having a brain is a crime on this one. All in all if you can turn off your brian and read then this is for you.
Those who use audio mode know why its bad
is it movie or comics please be comics liking it so far
good so far I like it. please keep up with regular updates
mc is very stupid, this is simply the worst fanfic, where the author uses the Omnitrix in the worst way I've ever seen, in fact he barely uses it.
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Would be nice if the author didn’t group up all hes/she’s writing so instead of “Hi” hi” It’s “Hello” “Hi”