Naruto: Rise of the Fallen Princess
Michel died peacefully, leaving his world behind.
But without his consent, he was cast into a new universe, forced to change the fate of a world he barely remembered.
Yet, faced with the brutality of his mission, he refused to sacrifice an innocent life.
Now, transformed into a spirit guide, Michel accompanies Hinata Hyūga—a girl broken by her own clan—as they navigate a fragile balance together, where any mistake could condemn them both.
In a world where willpower is everything, two broken souls will seek not only to survive... but to defy destiny itself.
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Warnings:
1) Things are going to get worse before they get better. The first few chapters are difficult and emotionally charged.
2) The main character is Hinata.
3) No power-ups without a good justification.
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This is a fan fiction written by me. I was also thinking of posting it on Scribble Hub. English isn't my native language. I'm not going to say I know everything about the world, and I admit I take a lot of literal liberties to put this together.
This isn't a self-insert like many other fan fictions I see out there, and it's actually a nice change of pace. I'm impressed by the pace of chapter releases and I like the story's pacing. I have to say that the first few chapters are a bit harsh, but every character has to have some tragedy to grow outside of the framework we've trapped them in. I find the backstory interesting, as are the changes that slowly unfold in the world and among the different characters we've seen in the original Naruto series. I even think rereading some things in the first few chapters makes things appear different, knowing what's going on in the background, which I think is well-crafted and well-thought-out. I think the second arc is better than the first, especially when it seems like the entire arc is outside of the original plot. It's clear the author is new and is finding his own rhythm, and I like what I'm reading. I hope you can finish it and see where this story ends! Rating: I gave you 5 stars because I don't really agree with hate reviews, which contribute nothing. Writing Quality: 4/5 (it's clear the author uses AI to write the story, but considering it's not their native language, it's understandable, we probably wouldn't have a chapter a day otherwise.) Stability of Updates: 5/5 (chapters every day, a luxury, I hope it continues) Story Development: 5/5 (I like how the story develops) Character Design: 5/5 (I liked the new characters and the changes to old ones) World Background: 5/5 (I really liked what you're doing with the gray areas in Naruto's world)
its realy great , one of the best fanfics of naruto , and uone of the few that make justicew for the character of hinata -....................-......................-.....-
MC has ruined her life in every way possible. Canon Hinata never gets branded, marries someone who loves her and has kids. This Hinata? Branded as a slave and then has her eyes burned put all cause the MC meddles in her life. Whata the point of this story?
The mc has only made things worst for her.
This entire fanfic is just angst and tragedy. If you are hoping for a strong female MC who changes things for the better, then this is not for you. Michel really just makes things worse for her. What the hell is the point of him being in the book ? Everything has just gone to hell and back. Very frustrating read.
OK i have to say, this story has really caught my attention because i wonder how you have her progress in strength and to what level; Does this soul power of hers' allow her to reach Naruto and Sasukes' level because once she awakens her byakugan, i feel like shell either get a tenseigan or have a really powerful byakugan almost like the otsutsuki and I really like how she has progressed as a character as well. She is growing in the silence and one day, shell rise like a phoneix. Im eagerly waiting for more updates rn