Nara of the 10 Shadows (Jjk/Naruto AU SI/OC)

Read up to 10 chapters so far but I can definitively say this is one of the best representations of the ten shadows technique done in a Naruto fanfic. Admittedly, we haven't seen the technique used much so early in the story due to a multitude of reasons (don't want to give spoilers, read the story for the reasons) but I love how the technique itself doesn't overshadow ninjutsu and other disciplines of the Naruto power system. Instead, both the ten shadows technique and Naruto's own power system are used by the MC to complement each other so props to the author. I love the portrayal of MC also and how the relationship between his parents is shown, I just wish we can get more of the interaction between his clan members and more on the experiments done on the ten shadows technique (of course, this could be shown later on in the stories considering that there are only 10 chapters released by the time of writing this review). All in all, I have no complaints and I love this story, although if I'm being nitpicky, maybe the chapters could be longer but that's just me being greedy to read more of this peak story. Keep on honing your craft author-san and l look forward to reading more. PS: PLEASE DON'T DROP THE STORY, I HAVE TRAUMATIC EXPERIENCE OF READING PEAK STORIES ONLY FOR THEM TO BE DROPPED. ANYWAY, WISHING YOU ALL THE BEST

writing is great aside a few grammar errors (honestly negligible), the dialogue is fun to read and the fights are fun too (few they may be for now) , hope the fic turns out great and chapters come faster

This has a lot of potential I like it. I can’t really say anything else besides good job with the story so far.

I think this fic has a lot of potential. A few minor spelling mistakes but I'm hooked and looking forward to more.