One glitch stole everything.
All that remained was vengeance… and something no longer human.
Raven was just a kid.
Too ordinary.
Happy. Naive.
And like all happiness in this tale, it was stolen.
His parents didn’t die.
They weren’t murdered.
They vanished, erases, swallowed by a glitch, a fracture in reality no one could explain.
Raven saw it happen.
With wide eyes and a soul slowly splintering.
No one answered.
No one came.
Not until three years later, when he awoke in a place that shouldn’t exist.
Level Space.
A dimensional labyrinth of anomalies and fear,
Where logic collapses,
And reality is nothing but screaming shards in the silence.
“You’re in Level Space. This is where all anomalies exist, even the ones that can’t be explained.”
No weapons.
No clues.
No reason to survive.
Still, Raven walked.
And there, he stopped being a victim.
He learned to speak to the dark.
He read things no mind should ever read.
He consumed madness, And made it his strength.
When he found a way out…
He was no longer Raven.
Not a survivor.
Not a hero.
But a destruction born of suffering and scars.
Now, he begins to break the world, with his own hands.
Chronicles of Codex records all that Raven has done.
But one day, the world will remember him, Not as the boy who was lost…
But as the shadow of ruin,
The will that sows fear and cruelty into the bones of existence.
Overall, the genre is really good, although the writing is still lacking, but the horror and psychological genres are really good, continue your work.
pengembangan ceritanya tolong di perbarui, mungkin soal dasar-dasar mekanisme sistem di cerita ini, dan soal desain Karakternya tolong buat agar lebih Dark atau lebih mengerikan, karena ya ini adalah Novel dengan mc Villain, jadi Desain Karakter yang seperti monster atau hal lainnya (kecuali manusia, elf, dan sejenisnya) tolong buat agar lebih dark dan menyeramkan, agar aura horornya Terasa 👍
Overall everything is good, but each genre and writing needs to be improved.