Reborn in the Northern Water Tribe in 83 AG—the same year as Zuko, I never expected to carry memories from another life. I didn’t care much about reincarnation until I was living it.
As a waterbender at the heart of the Siege of the North, my presence changes the story in ways I never imagined… though some things, frustratingly, refuse to change.
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This isn’t a light or funny tale—expect dark themes, hard choices, and very little humor.
5 Star review ... 👌🏻
This is a great start—it's rare to find an Avatar fanfic where the main character relies solely on one element and doesn't become overpowered by the end of the first ten chapters.
the story on its own is good with my only problem being that there are not many dialogues and that it's feels more like a recollection
I thought this was gonna be another cringey self-insert mess, but you actually pulled it off. Glad you kept the timeline mostly intact and didn’t wreck the canon, respect.
Ngl, I was a bit worried after reading the synopsis, but the story turned out really good. I'm glad you stayed true to the timeline and didn’t butcher it
Story is good, I'll admit it. While I do dislike the early days of the MC his childishness seems to have toned down a bit enough to actually be fun in a way. I'm only dropping for personal reasons regarding the Yue thing and even though it was never stated to be a thing I had thought they were going to be a pair but so far its following canon with the MC just being a plus one, granted its still quite early so that might change but still Yue kissing Sokka like in canon was meh so I'll stop here and wish the author luck.
It looks good so far. I’ll give it more time and may update my review depending on how the plot develops, but if the story keeps up this pace, it’s shaping up to be a solid read."
I have nothing to say except I NEED MORE
It's still a new story, but I can already say it's got a really solid start. It actually makes sense, the grammar isn't a crime against humanity, and the pacing feels right. I'm definitely recommending this one
It's seriously good. Not the usual op character, but something more natural and fun to read.
Good start so far. We'll see what you'll be cooking in the future! I really like the lore so far; it has the potential to be one of the best.
Honestly, there's nothing more to say other than I love this author's work. It's a solid 4.8 stars from me just for that. If the story keeps progressing this well, I'll definitely bump it up to 5 stars
Honestly was expecting a slump like most avatar novels here, but I was wrong the main character has a personality and actually fits in the world of the avatar. I hope the author has a good vision on where this story is going.
So what do you think of Kaito/Azula?
Fun story! I enjoy the more mature point of view of the Avatar world.