The Elder Stark (Marvel)

The Dream Lord himself asked Lucifer in a duel "What kills hope?"... And this author said he will continue his ather work after he writes this one and rest a bit from his other works... What else can I do than "hope" it happens? I guess I'll read this in the meantime... ----- I'm NOT crying OOOKKKK???? Just some fluff got in my eye and I see blurry...

As usual this is an author own review. But those of you who read my work, and I thank you for doing so, know how good my stories are. Even though I suck at continuing and even finishing them. I know. And I won't ask you to read this one. But if you do you won't be disappointed again. Promise.

Alright this Review is my way of trying to change the authors writing style. Use commas. Use longer sentences. I read a handful of paragraphs of the first chapter and it already annoyed the shit out of me. Every sentence is five words and a period, there’s more to writing than that. Example from memory: „“ Including the Marvel Cinematic Universe. Which Greg now knew like the back of his hand. He even watched all the mini-series in Disney+. Despite many of them not being that good. Save for those like Falcon and the Winter Soldier and Moon Knight. At least in his opinion. Moving on.“ Aside from that there really isn’t any flaw

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Well it's a well written story where so much can be explored. Story wise this book has potential though it's purely depends on author in which direction he intends to take this book. Not much there is to complain in book through I will say that conversation feels a little bland and Hallow between characters . And MC's character also lacking a little in expressing his feelings regards. All and all a good book.

A different type of story than the ones I’ve read on here, it’s a fresh and great start to a story and I am patiently waiting for more, great work

The update uncertainty is extremely infuriating. If you can't please take a very long break or go on hiatus or abandon this fic. Maybe even put it up for adoption. For the sake of sanity do anything except dangling a carrot of the "next chapter" in front of readers like they are donkeys. WQ 3.5 SD 4 CD 3.5 US negative 5 WB 4 Have a good day.

I am liking this so far. and good to see regular updates....................................................................................................