As Sukuna in Invincible

Good story, but waaay too much drama for my liking

If u know the author u know it's good, give it a try, if you like invincible and/or jujutsu kaisen you'll like it. 👌👌👍👍👍👍 . . . . . . .

Honestly, this is the best Invincible crossover fanfic I've ever read. I've read a lot of Invincible fanfics on WB, AO3, etc. some were decent, others were meh, but the good ones are very rare. However, the only real problem that I saw when I read excellent Invincible fanfics is that they stopped updating within a month or so. I hope you can keep this story going until the end. Or at least until the current season of Invincible. Keep up the great work!!!

It's a good fanfic because you express your characters as humans, but I feel like it's lacking in power scaling. But that doesn't mean the fanfic is bad; on the contrary, it's very good for the level of this platform.

This is one of the best JJK fanfic ever🤩

(As of chapter 24) This story is one of the best on the platform as of right now in my opinion in terms of updates, pacing and character relationships/development. The only two concerns that I have, that if changed, could push this to the top tier is: 1) Dialogue: It feels like Sukuna, Eve and Nolan speak way to formally to the point that they sound like robots (even though Sukuna and Nolan are 1000+ years old) . Compared to Jujutsu Kaisen and invincible it just feels a bit out of character for all three of them to speak this way. I feel like the only one that would even approach that level of speech is Sukuna even though most of his vocabulary is 'old fashioned' for a lack of better term. 2) Fights: I know that there have been some endnotes in some chapters explaining that fight scenes may not be your expertise but I feel like moving into the later part of the story, I feel like me and everybody else reading would really like to read some top tier fights that really show Sukuna's capabilities. Nolan vs Sukuna was a great fight, but I feel like it could have been expanded upon further, considering he was at 15 fingers worth of power (correct me if i'm wrong). You've been putting out a lot of really high quality chapters lately and everybody reading is grateful. :)

Very, very interesting concept and execution, A work don properly 👍

is the Best fanfic of invincible that i had read in wn

Alright truthfully speaking, I was for lack of a better word "uninterested" since it wasn't in my alley to read a Invincible FF, but after searching for a new FF to read, I saw this again, so I went "why not", and all I can say is, this is nice. a little spoiler, but is acceptable Writing Quality: 4 ⭐ The writing quality is coherent which brings the logic of actual stuff and the ideas the author use quite nicely, even tho the explanation for the use of cursed technique is just that everyone has it, and telling his friends is energy manipulation, which is also true and acceptable but for me lacks a little " flair" but overall very good writing quality, it is also easy to understand and also brings some humor to the story, like mentioning Stark tower and Lexcorp (no they are not in this story), so overall a 4. Story Development : 4 ⭐ Again a 4 star, since the story itself is interesting, and it flows nicely as well, as of now it still can't be judged too quickly, since there's still more chapter to come, but the interaction is a little lacking, but also good enough to read. MC is like any other rival to a protagonists, since he's Megumi, he's calculative, and cold, examples are like Sasuke from Naruto, Aki from Chainsaw Man, Chihiro from Kagurabachi, and other "cool and cold" character, which don't get me wrong, I like them, but still they feel more like a duality to the actual protagonist, not being the protagonist. My suggestion is make the MC more down to earth, not actually Sukuna, but someone people can relate, what I'm saying is "Make em cry" cause seeing a hero cry is nicer than seeing them stand tall over and over again, maybe like Batman from certain comics which shows his humane side. Also not much interaction with character like his uncle, BUT it is still early, so all of these are just suggestion. Character Design: 3 ⭐ Dunno what chu all expect, I mix the show and the comic together so yeah, but other than that, the OC doesn't really have much description to them, like his uncle who I just picture as Uncle Ben, and some other character, but hey, I'm not saying you do stuff like the Chinese author where they say "this woman is of black descent with voluptuous bossom, and big kissable lips" Na don't, I'm saying simple character description "bald, no hair, chubby, formal" and that's all so I can properly imagine. Update Stability: 5 ⭐ Updates are massed released for now, since it just came out yesterday, so not gonna judge fast, but it seems the Author is planning to update regularly (I hope) World Background : 4 ⭐ For me personally, there's not really much world building as of now, the story is still new so I won't push too far, but I hope this will be focused more when Omni-Man attack. Verdict : 4.0 ⭐ Overall a good read if you got nothing better to do, definitely would recommend. Me writing this in a school party for the 12th graders finished exams :

Five stars just for the idea. Really nice idea. Although I might revise my review after reading if it's not worth it.

Is this the peak I was looking for all these years?

pretty good just here to drop 5 star .... quite lacking in racist department butttttt

Enjoying the story lots hope this help in giving you motivation to keep writing

Honestly kinda disappointed in the way the is written Yeah I get that it’s a hero story but too much heroism for me it’s a pe existing world so I won’t give you 5 stars for that I simply don’t like the story in general because I don’t really like heroes but it a ok fic