Luffy Twin Brother: The Monkey King

First, giving MC Zoro's curse just kills it for me, Second, MC's name? yea, i know u just tryna be funny, but it makes it hard to read cuz the name just keeps popping up as making MC a girl, Lastly, the whole goddess messing with MC just cuz he joked around, wow ok, not boring at all~ and not cliche at all~🙄 PS: I will still give it a chance

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firstly mc name is really shit like you can give him any name first a girly name lucy atleast it was bearable but kong bro I know you want to make it funny but atleast choose good name and second goddess she wants him to save his world but why messing with him because he hits some joks bro and his cheat bro iIdon't want to say anything about it is also sheet👎👎👎🤮

Come on, 1st bad comedy, girl hits boy for no reason even though Mc is super strong. 2nd Mc with Zoro's curse... very boring. 3rd The goddess who wants to mess up Mc's life because of 1 joke. 4th not counting Mc himself, because he was reincarnated but doesn't remember anything about the world he chose to go to, and has the intelligence of a child, it would be easier to just make him Luffy's twin without the reincarnation part which could generate a much better story.

Man, I really tried to like this story, I really did try to. It had an interesting idea, but the execution was horrible. There were so, so many inconsistencies with the plot, with the mc's ability, and so much more, and its not even something complex that was wrong, its completely obvious stuff that even a kid would know that's incorrect. Like blud straight up said that lightning travels at a speed of 270 mph, while the actual speed is 270,000 mph. I wanted to give the benefit of the doubt that he might've somehow missed the 3 zeroes, but the sentence was said in comparison to the mc's speed, so it was very clear. Like Author really thought that there was cars which went faster than lightning. In short, this story is one brain aneurysm after another.

the first 4 chapters are good so far I just hope that you keep writing it's hard to find fanfics with more than 100 chapters keep it up

honestly the story is inconsistent mainly with the mc as we have no idea where his strength sits cuz you keep going all over the place with it and for some reason despite the name there is like one mention of sun wukong and nothing else the mc might as well have a different devil fruit and for some reason the mc is presented as smarter then luffy yet is consistently shown to be a moron

For fans of One Piece, the presence of a character like Lucy with a unique demon fruit will surely make Saya even more curious to follow the continuation of this story. 👍🤩👍

Looks good as far, the start was interesting lol. Keep the good job up

Day 61 Trying to find FL Emporio Ivankov in All FF

Pretty good so far, story development is fast paced but not too bad, and I am enjoying having an overpowered MC, he will just get stronger and stronger the more he fights.

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I like the story I feel like the thing with the goddess might get weird in the long run but so far good story

I ENJOY READING THIS SO FAR, ENJOY THE PREMISES AND HIS CHEAT THAT ARE NOT THAT OP BUT STILL OP AND I HOPE THE AUTHOR CONTINUES WRITING THIS FF, PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS STORY