In Danmachi As A Random Mob

Hello Everyone! LordIsland here! I've given myself a 5-star review, don't mind that. A few points about the story. MC - Light is a native from Danmachi, who awakens the memories from his previous life (when he was on Earth), and gets a system. He is not isekaid or transmigrated! I have yet to flesh out the MC's character and I have to see how to go about it. Background Lore : I've tried my best to explain the lore of Danmachi and will continue adding info as the story progress ! System : Yes, this story has a system but it is a bare- bones one, will the required features and nothing else. This story has elements from Fate mixed in it. Also, I've based this story on Astraea Record Vol 1, 2, 3, so you may see some name changes like Ryu Lion -> Lyu Leon Alise Lovell -> Alize Lovel Also as this is a Fanfic, please expect some minor changes from the Original, I'll change some minor things that I like even if they do not affect or change anything in the story. Please do not post meaningless things that why did you change that or change this, this is a Fanfic and something's will be different. Updates : There is no fixed update schedule, will update when the chapters are ready. And a big thank you for all those who are reading my FanFic. Let me know if you have any more questions. Will be happy to answer them.

The story is alright though kinda mid. The MC is very boring to be honest. Nothing really interesting about him in terms of personality, nothing that really stands out. Heck, even the system is kinda bland in design, very basic and similar with a lot of similar systems, even having the whole Gamer's Mind and Body Shtick. Also, even with the System, he reached Level 10 so fast without any consistent reason and just because of the system without much struggle further making it boring. Another issue i found is how much character interaction kinds skips the start. Intstead of watching him interact with named characters, people such as Noin, Anya, Mia and Syr are just immediately known with some quick mention that he met them already. Kinda of a waste to not see on how he even managed to get to know them. Also, where the hell did the whole having a sister come from? Wasn't he isekaid? The story also suffers from really misspelled names such as Ryu Lion being called Leon and even Alise being called Alice. While i can understand that their must be some lore changes and such but i feel like the whole Ereshkigal Familia being turned into the Tiamat Familia is kinda pushing it and overall feels like no reason at all. It doesn't even make sense and consistent with everything. Doesn't make sense because if that's the case, a lot of Familias would have done that. Overall the story kinda turned alright. It's not too bad but not really that overall interesting to read.

Please 🙏 don't drop!!!! Also hope mc is heroic type... we need ais and Freya no questions... Alice and captain of the hephaustus familia.. so don't drop please.

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Don't discontinue this one bro...................................(why is there a frickin word to write a review).....................................................................