Survival In The Apocalypse Suddently Appear

Hello, I am the author of this series, thank you very much for reading and giving feedback to this series. I feel that I have not done well enough and there are some sketchy parts, I will try to fix them in the future. I hope you will continue to give me more comments.

although the story have some mistake and with me this type of lore is not new but it's ok for me countinuing to reading it. Hope you can improve and add some twist for the story

good start, balance between buffing power and creating difficulties for the main character makes the story more interesting but i hope more characters appear, feels a bit lonely

I've only read the first few chapters but it's okay for me, I think I'll read more if I have more time

The start is fine, there is drama and many actions but not very good description, slightly repeated and need to push the details faster

There is no author who does not like their own work.

When looking at it, you can immediately see the problems it is still facing. I will give my opinion based on my own perspective. First, there are still some spelling mistakes, something that should not be there. Second, the narration is still not really smooth, there are repeated words and chapter breaks that are sometimes a bit forced. Third, the way the main character overcomes difficult situations is still a bit unbelievable, how can a small young girl overcome all that, I wonder.

The combination of the apocalypse idea and the system is very good but the problem is that it is relying more on the system part and forgetting the core of the apocalypse element is the rush, suffocation, drama, not the fighting scenes but the scenes of running, hiding, surviving and that is what I want more. Moreover, the apocalypse often comes with huge and long-lasting disasters, here I only saw it once in the beginning of the story. Anyway, it is not too bad as it is now

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Does this story have a male lead, or will it be a different female lead?

i suggest you can add my husband in your story[img=proud][img=proud]

just keep going like that[img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=strong]

love it, great story[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Hello, for some reasons I will pause this series here but it is not the end, I will be back at some unspecified time. [img=Speechless] [img=Smug]