Reincarnated As A First Rate Villain: I Don't Know How To Play My Role

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Score: 4.5/10 Critical Review: Bad Writing Style Can Kill even the best Books The start of the book was actually pretty good. It was a refreshing beginning, with some funny humor and a bit of lore. The reincarnation was handled well, striking a nice balance between confusion and ambition. In the initial chapters, readers could really feel the main character’s growth. The story showed immense potential, as the initial premise was very intriguing. I was already hoping to go on an amazing journey, witnessing a full saga unfold. But as the story progressed, I realized that with every chapter, the amount of detail about mundane things kept increasing. A small event, such as visiting a town, became a bloated word salad stretched over 10+ chapters where nothing significant happened. The author’s writing style can best be described as ‘word vomit,’ with the main goal seemingly just to extend the chapter with irrelevant information. Arcs that should have taken fewer than 10 chapters somehow dragged on for 30+, with finales that were quite a letdown. In my reading experience, the more I read, the more frustrated I became. The chapters are very long, but truthfully, there is very little substance. As a paying reader, I felt like I was being scammed — and I assume that’s the main objective of the author. Every chapter had multiple paragraphs of over 500+ words each describing the most basic things, like how a carriage moved or how someone walked. Some might argue that this builds up the story and background, but in reality, it added nothing of value. I would bet money that 75% of readers dropped the novel by chapter 15 — not because the premise was bad, but because of the god-awful writing style. I assumed the book would improve as the writer gained more feedback and practice, but even after 45 chapters, it remained the same. Finally, even though I was quite invested in the story, I decided it was better to drop a book that left me frustrated most of the time rather than entertained. This book serves as a great example that no matter how good a story’s premise is, bad writing quality can completely destroy the reading experience and turn the book into a failed project. I would never recommend this book to anyone, as reading it is not a rewarding experience. I really hope the author learns from this and tries to improve in the future.

Don’t know if it’s just me but the story is good but after like chapter 18 it just become him describing everything most of the chapter with very little stuff actually happening it’s like the author is dragging it out to have more word count idk if it’s just me tho

It's a good story and author knows what he wants but then around chapter 20 or so the writing becomes overly descriptive and looks like some bs to increase word count like bro took two chapter to just enter a palace...try reducing that and your good

19 chapters in and all I can say it's amazing the concept of the story of heroes regressing with their memories intact and they will try to kill our mc got me hooked and I can't wait for future chapters

Author can you please stop adding some edgy lines at almost every end of a chapter, it's the same with your first novel. The story is still pretty good tho just reduce the edgy and cringy lines, thank you.

So far I like it, has it own twist to the trope . Im only like 25 chapthers in but already feel fine with seeing how things go. The one twist that Im not sure how I want to play out is if he actually has to stand against the heroes or not😭 like will they ever find out he isnt the same Lucien ?