I haven't written a review before, so i don't know if this will be what you're looking for necessarily. The story as a base is good. The characters and world building are good. Im not feeling overwhelmed at all, and i dont feel as if there is a ton of info dumping, etc. If i had to offer criticism it would be that the main character zane is not front and center to the story often enough. However i wouldn't want that to change how the story is written. The story is kinda slow paced with how events are unfolding. Even though the book throws you right into the plot. Speaking for myself here, the story is good enough that i can be patient to see the good stuff happen. I think its a very good read so far and it keeps me coming back. Sorry if this is a bit much.
a month ago
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Divine_Hand1
Hello, cocky author here.
Let me give you a quick heads-up: there are only two possible outcomes when you read this novel—you’ll either love it, hate it, or maybe both. Either way, I’m not here to hold your hand. If you’re expecting some weird harem-type shit, save yourself the disappointment and click away now.
Yes, there’s romance. Yes, there’s bromance—if you catch my drift.
No, there’s no lazy writing or recycled tropes (at least I hope not).
I’ll be updating often—two chapters a day, five days a week. That’s right. I work harder than your favorite slacker MC.
Feedback is welcome. Criticism? Sure, bring it on—but don’t overdo it. I’m still human, and yeah, I might take things a little personally.
Just give me a chance to cook up my masterpiece.
If you’ve read this far, thanks. You're a real one.
Now if you're done reading this shit... SCRAM!
Hahahaha. Datebayo.
I haven't written a review before, so i don't know if this will be what you're looking for necessarily. The story as a base is good. The characters and world building are good. Im not feeling overwhelmed at all, and i dont feel as if there is a ton of info dumping, etc. If i had to offer criticism it would be that the main character zane is not front and center to the story often enough. However i wouldn't want that to change how the story is written. The story is kinda slow paced with how events are unfolding. Even though the book throws you right into the plot. Speaking for myself here, the story is good enough that i can be patient to see the good stuff happen. I think its a very good read so far and it keeps me coming back. Sorry if this is a bit much.
Hello, cocky author here. Let me give you a quick heads-up: there are only two possible outcomes when you read this novel—you’ll either love it, hate it, or maybe both. Either way, I’m not here to hold your hand. If you’re expecting some weird harem-type shit, save yourself the disappointment and click away now. Yes, there’s romance. Yes, there’s bromance—if you catch my drift. No, there’s no lazy writing or recycled tropes (at least I hope not). I’ll be updating often—two chapters a day, five days a week. That’s right. I work harder than your favorite slacker MC. Feedback is welcome. Criticism? Sure, bring it on—but don’t overdo it. I’m still human, and yeah, I might take things a little personally. Just give me a chance to cook up my masterpiece. If you’ve read this far, thanks. You're a real one. Now if you're done reading this shit... SCRAM! Hahahaha. Datebayo.