"Raised in a quiet village veiled in ancient myths, Hikaru lived unaware of the truth behind his family’s past. But when a ruthless gang burns his home to the ground in search of a forbidden sword, his world collapses. With his grandparents gone and a strange power stirring within him, Hikaru is thrust into a journey of vengeance, hidden magic, and blood-stained secrets. The truth awaits—but so do the shadows that have haunted his bloodline since the day he was born."
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from the 3 chapter i could tell the Novel have a great potential, I appreciate it, but wish u can focus how to make it more emotional.
A wonderful and somewhat complex novel._
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this is an interesting and wonderful story. the background of the characters is really sad, I almost cried on the 2nd ch :c I see big potential!!
Keep cooking bro overall I'm liking the story it gives a sense of mystery and revenge plots draw me in easily🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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