The Divine Web We Call Family

The Divine Web We Call Family

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Author: NovaWeaver
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Need to a urgent revision the story flow feels unconnected between Chapters right now. Especially Chapter 1. I need to fix that and rewrite parts or Chapters again. There are some sentences and pharagraphs that seems to not have any weight on the overall story.

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Curlylocks97
Curlylocks97

I guess this version is now a bit better, pls keep writing ✍️ 😘🥰 Don’t give up [img=strong]

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