The story follows the main character as he trains himself to be the best swordsman there is. Meanwhile, the story also follows another character named Baldwin to uncover the past.
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19 days ago
1
Rohan_Jadhav_8220
This gripping excerpt plunges readers into a tense and atmospheric setting right from the first line. The imagery is vivid—dark corridors, black chains, and a sliver of light from fifty feet above set a foreboding tone that instantly sparks curiosity. The pacing is deliberate, guiding us step by step through the prisoner’s ominous journey.
The central mystery is masterfully introduced with the name “Claus,” which sends a ripple of unease through the soldier. The internal conflict of the guard, juxtaposed with his rigid adherence to duty, adds a compelling layer of tension. Why is a man of such high alert status among common prisoners? The unanswered question lingers, gripping the reader and pulling them deeper into the narrative.
The final touch—General Baldwin’s appearance—hints at larger forces at play, suggesting that this is only the beginning of a larger, intricate plot. This snippet reads like the opening of a thrilling dystopian or military mystery, and it leaves the reader wanting more...
a month ago
2
Nirmanika
Wow, interesting story. I was sad at part of Claus Death. wonder what the kingdom is cooking. Would love to see an amine version of this if there is any??
16 days ago
1
Shripad_Barde
Good one... I need more parts. I loved it.. The storytelling is good but few words are so high standard that those who knows a little bit English like me may get some difficulties while understanding but overall it is good... Keep it up
Just a shameless plug from the author. I hope you love the story as much as I liked it. Please don't forget to write a review or a comment. Motivates me alot.
This gripping excerpt plunges readers into a tense and atmospheric setting right from the first line. The imagery is vivid—dark corridors, black chains, and a sliver of light from fifty feet above set a foreboding tone that instantly sparks curiosity. The pacing is deliberate, guiding us step by step through the prisoner’s ominous journey. The central mystery is masterfully introduced with the name “Claus,” which sends a ripple of unease through the soldier. The internal conflict of the guard, juxtaposed with his rigid adherence to duty, adds a compelling layer of tension. Why is a man of such high alert status among common prisoners? The unanswered question lingers, gripping the reader and pulling them deeper into the narrative. The final touch—General Baldwin’s appearance—hints at larger forces at play, suggesting that this is only the beginning of a larger, intricate plot. This snippet reads like the opening of a thrilling dystopian or military mystery, and it leaves the reader wanting more...
Wow, interesting story. I was sad at part of Claus Death. wonder what the kingdom is cooking. Would love to see an amine version of this if there is any??
Good one... I need more parts. I loved it.. The storytelling is good but few words are so high standard that those who knows a little bit English like me may get some difficulties while understanding but overall it is good... Keep it up