Naruto: Stormbreaker
Author: Andreathegiant
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After getting revenge for his murdered sister, he was gifted with a proper deep fry courtesy of the electric chair. Once he was cooked to a well-done crisp, he expected to wake up to fire, brimstone, screaming souls, torture demons with forked tongues, and the same three Nickelback songs on loop.
Instead, he woke up somewhere far less expected.
Want to know where? Read the novel. Or, you know... just look at the title. I really didn’t plan this part through, did I?
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One of the better Naruto SI fics, writing is great and updates are steady. Only issue is that the pacing is pretty slow, it's one of those stories that spends a lot of time with the MC as a kid. It's not so bad though since the characters are interesting and it seems things are picking up a bit.
The best Naruto fanfic in this platform, No trace of AI assistance in sight so far, or if it's there, i couldn't recognize them, a big plus Plot direction is still unclear, but from the casual and slightly comedic tone of the story so far, i imagine it would be generally wholesome, or at least i hope it would be The Ninja world needs more heroes
So far so good! Currently am 29 chapters in and I’m loving it. The writing is good, and the storyline is interesting. The author has a good sense of humor, adding in bits here and there but also does a good job not adding too much humor. As for the mc and his powers so far there isn’t much but I think the author is definitely on the right track. I cant wait for the next chapters! As for any critiques, I’d say I’d love some more action, but I know we are very early on and the action will come eventually. The action we’ve gotten has been very good. Also with characters, I think some more characters being more involved could go a long way however I think we are too early to really say that they are not involved. PS - Will update my review to be more appropriate once we reach around 100 ch. But for now you are doing a great job author please keep going.🙏
First of all about style, story is kinda of narrated in a lighthearted way for the most part and author has done a good job in doing so. Well I have little issue about length of chapters I feel latest chapters are bit small. Coming to the story part, so far I haven't found any major issues with the plot, well thought of story so far, may be minor issues about some pov changes, like you could write the name of character in bold while changing pov. I have a sincere request to author please don't make it a harem or orient major part of story in romance in future. No issues regarding grammer. I felt first few chapters rushed and kind of cringe in my opinion but then author picked off real well from then. I suggest author rewrite first 3 chapters in the future as most readers choose to read after reading first few. Some more context could be given on the MC to be fair. as reading without almost no context about MC's past is not helping to involve in the story( like adding some more glimpses of MC's past is suggested). Some plot problems I find is why won't major clans spend more resources towards young like some medicine for faster physical growth even if MC started training early, even clan kids also do so due to pressure in clan that too just after great war they also have more resources too. I hope author continues to write with out dropping in middle and maintain the quality. Good work appreciate your effort, would like to get a masterpiece by end of it. Again I am stressing please don't make it harem please🥲.