Heavenly Demon Ascending

Four chapters in and so far it’s good I specially like the mc

this was really nice, even tho i only completed one chapter it was pretty good. I'll save it to my collection and read when I get time to.

I read up to the latest chapter (chapter 4 as of this review) and can say that this story definitely holds a lot of potential. looking forward to see how MC Mo Bai would navigate the challenges that lie ahead, hopefully in a unique way! ✨

I read up to the current stopping place of 4 chapters at the time, and I can tell that this author has a solid grasp on every principle necessary to develop something great, for this site. I can't wait for chapter 5, and I'll definitely be adding this to my library, POST-HASTE!

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6 chapters in. And it’s pretty good. Author created an easy to like villain male lead. Underpowered but not too weak. Good explanation as to how the power ups happen. Unlike a lot of other level up novel this one explains off rips how to beat the system and it actually adds up logically. Huge plus. This reminds me of “who rules the world” a Chinese costume drama. Minus the romance. The descriptions on fight scenes are will described but not overly descriptive, as if they’re adding a bunch of senseless adjectives for increased word count. I can feel the patience written so far. All and all 5/5 stars.

i read all 9 chapters in one go i really like it i can't wait for more

Read this till chapter 7 and loved it. The concept is really original and good. I like the MC and always root for him. Can’t wait for more

I have read this book till 7 Chapter and I am sure that this novel definitely hold potential to rise and become famous. I just request author to upload daily in his early stages.

This book is really perfect book with perfect story , your writing style is so good. I hope to read more author, I really recommend this book for new readers

overall, it is fairly interesting. the action jumps right in with that initiation ceremony, and the Mo Bai character seems very interesting. Looking forward to new updates

7 chapters so far, and I like the story, plus the MC. The story holds a lot of potential. It's a nice novel, but too short, done in 2 minutes. So update fast. Waiting for it.[img=recommend]

7 chapters so far as this review written and obviously this review is very subjective, so take it with a grain of salt. Writing Quality Personally no 'flowery prose' is a plus for me. Still, the time aspect of the story might be a bit vague sometimes. Perhaps it could be improved the same as the place aspect has done in term of description. Story Development Not much to tell from a little chapter but there is already a plot intro set in motion. Character Design No overly detail about the character's physical figure is nice but guess it should be compensated by character's character (?). So far it is only focused on MC. Update Stability I might say let the author cook but I rate it low as Web novel standard demands 2 chapters everyday (too much, I know). World Background There is already a glimpse about the power system but the daily social life of people around might come after MC graduation from the academy. Conclusion While I like the less clutter from the so-called proses, but I think a tidbit or two about the surrounding such as the change of season and activities of the living there might add the reading experience (and obviously the word counts too in order to not exhaust the plot point too much). Well, I add this conclusion because you seemed to take inspiration from RI, so try another RI (Renegade Immortal) if you haven't read one.